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Holden commented on the post, Coconut Lime Breeze 3 years, 2 months ago
I love the sensory images in this, I can really smell this perfume, and I love it!
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Holden commented on the post, Impaired 3 years, 2 months ago
I love this story! I can truly feel the narrator’s fear
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Holden commented on the post, fighting the current 3 years, 2 months ago
I love this poem, Ashton. You really encapsulate the confusing nature of self doubt and life as a whole
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Holden commented on the post, Carpe Diem 3 years, 2 months ago
As someone who took latin, I really like how you make this phrase even more beautiful than it already is
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Holden commented on the post, work boots 3 years, 2 months ago
I love this poem! It’s so good! I love how you describe how crappy these boots are, yet you still love them
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Holden wrote a new post, Thank you, Theatre 3 years, 2 months ago
Six long years
Eleven great roles
It’s time to say goodbye
And pour out our souls
We sit all together
In the basement we share
To show all our companions
How much we really care
Although we are lea
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Holden wrote a new post, ISO Sam's World 3 years, 4 months ago
allison has
a widow’s peak
always shown
never mentioned
it sits
a frame
for her face
she looks
like dracula
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Holden,
Very nice poem and I really enjoyed the comment about looking like Dracula. I found it very funny. -
Hi Holden,
Awesome poem about your friend, Allison! I really enjoyed it, especially the lines “always shown” and “never mentioned.”
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Hi Holden,
Very interesting poem. I like how you talk about Allison’s widows peak that no one mentions it, yet people think she looks like dracula. Very funny. -
This is one of the best poems I’ve read recently- I love the unique description that really gives me a good mental image
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Holden commented on the post, The Inevitable Consequences of Adoption on the Adoptee's Unconscious Psyche 3 years, 4 months ago
This is a very powerful perspective on adoption that better explains similar stances on adoption that are often don’t go into much detail so thank you for opening our eyes to the difficulties of daily life often experienced by adoptees. Thank you for putting your time into researching this topic and showing the true parts of life.
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Holden wrote a new post, Rave Poem 3 years, 4 months ago
In the style of Giovanni.
Rave Poem
the lights when up
the crowd went silent
and the room went dead
when suddenly the lights went up
in vibrant colors
and bright lights ablaze
and the crowd went
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Holden,
This is a really beautiful poem. It;s like I’m at the rave (even though I’ve never been to one). Thank you so much for sharing.
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Hi Holden! I really like this poem. It has great imagery! It reminds me when I saw Louis the Child, have you ever heard of them?
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Holden became a registered member 3 years, 5 months ago
Creating a poem around something you’ve been able to experience with one group for four years is crazy beautiful and amazing its inspirational. I like how the poem represent something you’re leaving but you’ll never leave it for good.
Holden, this is such a sweet poem. I love how sentimental and heart warming it is.
This poem is beautiful. Its very touching and makes the reader feel for you.