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Issaka commented on the post, Learning for Life
Dear Idelkys,
I was really amazed by the way you wrote your analysis about the three stories that you entitled “Learning for Life” because there are some really highlighted parts that makes your analysis really powerful. The first part is when you talked about the theme of the three stories. To be more specific you mentioned “the sacri…Read More -
Issaka commented on the post, Stories about Equality
Dear Leticia,
I was really amazed by the manner you wrote your analysis about the three stories which you named “Stories about Equality” because you mentioned several sentences that were holding heavy meanings. I think that these sections shouldn’t be neglected but need to be talked about. The first line in your story is “even though a young b…Read More -
Issaka commented on the post, Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories
Dear Lenin
I was really amazed by the way you wrote your analysis about the three stories that you entitled “Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories” because there are some really highlighted parts that makes your analysis really powerful. The first part is “three stories are similar to each other because all the characters are learning somet…Read More -
Issaka commented on the post, Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories
Dear Lenin
I was really amazed by the way you wrote your analysis about the three stories that you entitled “Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories” because there are some really highlighted parts that makes your analysis really powerful. The first part is “three stories are similar to each other because all the characters are learning somet…Read More -
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It occurred to me that these three have one strong connection in between and that is how the social class is
Read MoreIt occurred to me that these three have one strong connection in between and that is how the social class is mentioned in each of one them. As in the story, “Everyday Use”, Dee was the girl in the family...
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Dear Issaka
I am impressed by your analysis “,America Inequality in Different Ways” because you used all the three stories to show how they struggles of being poor. And how you show wealth unequally distributed in the U.S. One paragraph that stands out for me is,” In the three stories the authors talked about African american female appearance and the way they give moral advice ” I think this really show the imagery in the story to show how black women look or should look. Another paragraph that stands out for me is, your introduction I think this section really can help the reader to understand more about the three and make clear. Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. -
Dear Issaka,
I am fascinated by the way you compared and contrasted the three short stories. You took a specific details from each story and you elaborated on how they all convey the issue about race and wealth in the American community.
One thing that stands out for me was your word choices and descriptive writing to show the wealth inequality. The word “Bottom Dwellers ” shows that poor people are being perceived as less that others even though they didn’t make themselves poor.
Another thing that stands out for me your eloquence . You are able to expires your ideas and convey a feeling throughout the entire essay.
Have you ever heard of Taha Hussein ? I think you will be interested in that because he share with you the same writing style.
Thank you for your detailed analysis . I look forward to see more work from you. -
Dear Issaka,
I am impressed by your essay “,America Inequality in Different Ways” and the way you compared and contrasted the three short stories. The detail you used and the way your go back and forth in your is very nice
One thing that stands out for me was how you choose your words and connect it directly to your literary element. The word “Ironically”shows how funny lifes can differ from one another.
Another thing that stands out for me is the last paragraph . I would like you to talk about black female body. I am interested in your writing style.
Thank you for your analysis. I look forward to seeing more work from you.
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Dear Issaka,
I am Choose an adjective grateful to show you my emotion that I feel when I read your story, “America Inequality in Different Ways,”. Your story was too emotional for me because it was much realist and had a great thought about the three stories the way that all authors describe women blue with respect. And how society should treat them.
One line that stands out for me is, “A local girl will have hips and a nice ass but won’t be quick about letting you touch her ” I think this evidence is interesting because it shows how much women are their own value no matter the status. since a respectful woman will never let you touch her.
Another sentence that stands out for me and it is fascinating is, “Her feet were always neat-looking as if God himself had shaped them with a certain style…Hair is all over his head a foot long and hanging from his chin like a kinky mule tail.” This stood out for me because The whole story is about how you like the narrator is advising the boy on how to treat a woman based on their race. And this has a great connection with the whole world of today specifically west Africa because women can’t have voice when man is not there. Since they are not considered women like something precious that we must value.
Your story helps me to understand story that I once read in Africa call “Feminist from women are illegal in Africa” that also talk about the abuse of men on women despite all humans are equal boys don’t want to hear that. Since they are thinking without them women can not survive or arrive so some people don’t care about women’s precious value that they have. I still think why this is a big deal in our society but never have the answer like today after finishing reading your three stories rewritten I realize the big impact from boys to girls .
Thanks for your summary of three stories. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Since I really enjoy it and it helps me to open my mind about our society even though sometimes it is really hard for us like women we can change it . Trying to change their mind is a good solution because we have a right that boys should respect us no matter what will happen.