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  • May 6, 2021

The punctuation in this line creates a sense of order. How after describing what happened at that exact time, now he is moving on to describing what he sees.

  • February 8, 2021

It caused me to re-read it because at this point it seems as if they don't want to be at the river. Yet it also does seems like they do want to be at the river.

  • February 8, 2021

The thought we imagine a character has is how everything stopped for a moment. That he was able to notice that both of their breathes caught at the same time.

  • February 8, 2021

In this moment it seems like it was a time where the whole world just disappears. It was just her and him there in the river.

  • February 8, 2021

This is way they described the Detroit River and it sounds so dirty. It makes it seems like its just a lot of water that's dirty.

  • February 8, 2021

This really helps you to envision where they are at. Also, I could really see it because I have been on a gray coarse beach before.

  • February 8, 2021

They are trying to figure out who can go to Puerto Rico and try and convince her to come back. Tish's mother is the one that can go.

  • January 19, 2021

Fonny sounds mad. Like Fonny's rage that was built, got let out.

  • January 19, 2021

The reason why they are sending people to Puerto Rico is that, that's where she is from. So they think that she went back to her home.

  • January 19, 2021

Mrs.Rogers has disappeared out of the blue. Mrs.Rogers is very important at the moment because she was the one who accused fonny at the lineup.

  • January 19, 2021

Tish's mom gave like an important”speech” to tish. You could tell it was very heartfelt and it was coming from being a mother.

  • January 19, 2021

Fonny and Daniel have finally seen each other again! It brought them memories of when they were children

  • January 18, 2021

It seems like Fonny had a challenging, difficult time in prison. He went through a lot just because of an accusation.

  • January 18, 2021

Fonny really truly loves tish. Even takes the blame of arriving late right in front of her father.

  • January 18, 2021

By fonny doing this, well to me it's showing that he cares for tish and gives her comfort. Tish must be feeling safe in his arms.

  • January 18, 2021

woah. Now rereading that part i defintly see what you are talking about. It seems like she did have a moment to just brethae. Where she did look at what's happening around and with her. A hit of reality.

  • January 4, 2021

yes, that is so much very true. Mrs.Hunt is just not it. Tish's mother for the win!

  • January 4, 2021

This kind of sounds like she's having a “glow up” maybe?

  • January 4, 2021

Woah,by this tish should realize that she likes/loves fonny. Just by a touch on a forehead reminds her of fonny. She's in loveee.

  • January 3, 2021

Tish's mom is very supportive about fonny and tish's baby.

  • January 3, 2021

now that's a surprising type of childhood life to say when you are older.

  • January 3, 2021

They weren't really religious but did go to church here and there.

  • January 3, 2021

Mrs.Hunt seems to be the type of rude person and just mean in general.

  • January 3, 2021

Mr.Hunt seems nice and cares about his son's girlfriend as in a family way.

  • January 3, 2021

I find this actually quite funny how her name is Clementine but don't call her anywhere near related to the name, she goes by Tish.

  • January 3, 2021

This is a memory that Tish has when she was younger.

  • January 3, 2021

She wants to have the baby of theirs. Even though she is 19 she truly wants it.

  • January 3, 2021

Fonny and Tish are literally so cute together.

  • January 3, 2021

even after their sexual intercourse still gotta be very responsible and return her to her home before dawn.

  • January 3, 2021

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