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    Reflection For Proposal

    For the last 4 weeks i’ve been working on a upstander proposal. The proposal was about global warming and its effects on animals. We did Research and made a instagram and some flyers a

    Upstander Reflection

    Reflection For Proposal For the last 4 weeks i’ve been working on a upstander proposal. The proposal was about global warming and its effects on animals. We did Research and made a instagram and some flyers and posted them around...

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    Dear Ms. Barra

    We are writing to you because you are the Chairman and Chief Executive Officer of General motors company (GM.com).According to US Global Warming

    Emissions, the global warming endangers our

    Global warming and its effects on animals

    Dear Ms. Barra We are writing to you because you are the Chairman and Chief Executive Officer of General motors company (GM.com).According to US Global Warming Emissions, the global warming endangers our health and one of the causes of global warming...

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    • I enjoyed reading this post due to it being relatable to most people, especially those of driving age. I particularly enjoyed the information in regards to indirect pollution. I also appreciate the outreach for GMC to make less trucks and more fuel efficient cars. Also being in education I appreciate the efforts to stop global warming.

    • I really enjoyed the use of statistics and logical evidence to support the message you were trying to convey. Do you think that the chairman would agree to create more fuel efficient cars in order to help perserve animals’ habitats?

    • Dear Irvin,
      I enjoyed reading your letter, and am impressed you are taking action for something that you believe in. I hope that you hear back from whoever you hope to reach at General Motors, and make sure to offer alternatives to fuel burning cars as mentioned above. Re read and fix some grammatical errors and I’m sure this will be a very poignant letter. One thing you might add that came to my mind when reading, is to mention ways that GM can benefit as well from making environmentally conscious decisions. I hope to hear more from you.

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    Dear Anna

    I am super happy about your poem “Continue On” because the message you bring with this poem. It also seems like you tried really hard on your poem to make it a strong piece of writing. And it seems like you really meant every word on the poem and tried to bring a strong message to people when their in struggles. One set of lines tha…Read More

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    How can a child  “technically die”. In the book Unwind by Neal Shusterman, Conner, Risa and Lev are striving to run away from being unwound. The process by which a child is both terminated and yet kept aliv

    Our Pecha Kucha

    How can a child  “technically die”. In the book Unwind by Neal Shusterman, Conner, Risa and Lev are striving to run away from being unwound. The process by which a child is both terminated and yet kept alive. This...

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