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Are you an Ally? View Comment
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  • May 2, 2019

Thank you for your taking your time to leave us a comment. One of our action of changes was to do a Middle School presentation and we successfully finished one on Tuesday and we have 2 more left. During our presentation we talked about GSA's and how they could...

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It’s better than nothing View Comment
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  • April 3, 2019

Dear Geno, I am amazed with your poem “ It’s better than nothing ” because the words you used in the poem are really powerful. The way you decided to line up each phrase is outstanding. When I write poems it’s confusing on how to line up the phrases I...

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Cultural Celebrations In Oakland View Comment
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  • February 13, 2019

Hey Mr. Ogaz thank you for taking the time out of your own personal life to comment on my post. Sorry I wasn’t very explicit I tried talking about the celebrations that I went to but I think it all got messed up. The 2 main focuses I wanted...

Thank you for taking your time out of your day to comment on my post. Choosing this topic to talk about was a great decision because now I see how many people relate to the Oakland cultural celebrations. I’m so happy you made a new friend while being at...

Thank you for taking your time out to comment on my post I really appreciate it. I really enjoyed writing about this topic because when the season of celebrations come around you see many commercials on TV about how fun they are and they really are. Many people have...

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OUSD and Problems View Comment
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  • January 16, 2019

Dear Valerie, Your blog was amazing! You really brought out your own opinions on this topic. I agree with the OUSD raising awareness because some of our parents don’t know about this and if they advertised families taht school lunch is a problem it could have kids having...

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OUSD Budget View Comment
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  • January 16, 2019

Dear Janie, Your topic is a relevant topic right now. Teachers aren’t getting payed the minimum, money is overused in unnecessary supplies. Money should be spent the correct way because everyone deserves opportunities and if we don’t have opportunities is it really helping us? Your analysis is really good...

Dear Ivy, You covered an important topic in your blog and this clearly shows ...

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The Good and The Bad View Comment
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  • December 12, 2018

Dear Kelly, Your poem is beautiful. I really likes your last line “But the ultimate tragedy was their agony”. That last line was powerful and it rhymed. Looks like you put two topics in and made it all one. I also liked how you used...

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My Community View Comment
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  • December 12, 2018

Dear Kenya, Amazing poem you have! Community is a big topic because in those communities we have a thing called home. I liked how you used “A plague Plague of both houses?Nah a plague on the people who created this“Street Disturbance” this part is outstanding. Usually...

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Imelda’s Life View Comment
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  • October 24, 2018

Thank you Janie and o=you already know I appreciate my culture so much! Thank you for your comment!

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Imelda’s Life View Comment
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  • October 24, 2018

Thank you so much and culture is something very important in my family! 🙂

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Imelda’s Life View Comment
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  • October 24, 2018

I really appreciate your comment and honesty!

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Valerie’s Shadow Box View Comment
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  • October 10, 2018

Dear Valerie, Your shadow box is amazing! I saw the effort you put in it when we worked on our shadow boxes. I like how you explained the dominant narratives. The last sentence was so powerful just like Ms.Portugal says “ Words Have Power “....

Dear Ingrid, Your artist statement is so clear. Your shadow box is so colorful. You explained in detail what you included in your box. I like the quote you chose. I also like what you said about the quote that one day everything will pay off....

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Shadow Box Narrative View Comment
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  • September 14, 2018

Dear Liz, I am inspired by your shadow box because you were not afraid of sharing what your shadow box meant to you. Your shadow box is so beautiful it’s so colorful and I love what you included in it. It looks like you really took...

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