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    Today there are many homeless people everywhere in the united states begging for food and homes to sleep. The government should do something about it because many of them are dying of hunger, their everyday

    Homeless

    Today there are many homeless people everywhere in the united states begging for food and homes to sleep. The government should do something about it because many of them are dying of hunger, their everyday job is to...

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    • I agree with you that the government should help homeless people by providing them with food and shelter. Everyone will have their difficult time. The government should help them out of difficulties.
      The following link can help you learn more.
      https://thetartan.org/2015/11/9/forum/homeless

    • Dear Idrissa:

      I am surprised by his publication, “Homeless” I think this is very important because there are many people who have nowhere to live. They also don’t have to eat. I also think that the government should do something to help them.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “The government should do something about it because many of them are dying of hunger, their everyday job is to wake up and go beg for money and food so they can survive in the street” . I think this is hopeful because by doing so you can give a message to people who also have other people who care about other people who don’t have a place to live or eat.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward seeing what you write next, because it is very important that other people know about this. Also the government to help these people.

      Evelyn

    • Hey Idrissa,
      I totally agree with you that the government should be doing more to support those without homes or ready access to food. But I think this problem is only a result of a bigger societal issue. A large portion of US citizens believes they should get out of their hole by themselves. Individualism is a priority to so many, but I believe that if the US had more socialist laws and thoughts we wouldn’t have as much of a problem with homelessness. Laws that are created to serve the most good to the greatest number of people. Overall well written, but maybe society should help first and force the government to take action.

    • Hey Idrissa! I liked reading your post. I like how you mentioned that everyone makes a mistake in their lives and shouldn’t be punished for it. I just have a question, what if people don’t want the help? what if they like their lifestyle. That’s my only question, but I really liked reading your post! Here is an article that I think you might like! https://www.usich.gov/solutions/

    • Dear Idrissa,

      I was really interested in your post because the title of “Homeless” caught my attention. I like the statement you mentioned of “I believe the government should do something about it because if the government doesn’t take any action on helping the homeless society definitely won’t.” I agree to this because i feel like the government should realize things like this and actually care. This is part of society to them but in my eyes i think it is unfair, they shouldn’t have to go to sleep worrying about what their next meal will be. Although the government does have much control of this i believe we also have the power to create changes. Some ways we could help is by maybe supporting them with some essentials or even buying them some food to help them get by. If we all as a community work together we can create change.
      Thanks i look forward to seeing future writings!

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    Dear Derrick,

    I am amazed by your beat work of art & music, called “JazzDanceBeat” because the beat sounds like it’s for enjoyment. and the melodies really make you want to dance, even when you don’t feel like it.

    One part of your song that stands out for me is where the beat flow changes almost every five to 10 seconds because you didn’t wan…Read More

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    I am proud of your post, “Football, Basketball, video games,” because you were into positive and negative activities by gambling over video games and you almost die of it back in 2014 so you stopped. I wish the best for you and keep chasing your dream and you might achieve it one day.
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    The Old man was rewinding back his memories to how great of a fisher he used to be when he was at a young age, he caught 2 huge fish when he was younger but as he gets older his body starts to get weak but his

    The Old Man

    The Old man was rewinding back his memories to how great of a fisher he used to be when he was at a young age, he caught 2 huge fish when he was younger but as he gets older...

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    Today in America many black people are being killed by the cops because of their skin color and that’s not right.The white police officers are stopping and arresting black people because that how they make money

    BLACK LIVES MATTER

    Today in America many black people are being killed by the cops because of their skin color and that's not right.The white police officers are stopping and arresting black people because that how they make money by arresting other...

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