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Idrissa commented on the post, Laughter is Beautiful
Dear Mary :
I am excited by your post, “Laughter is Beautiful,” because you are not bothered about how people will view you exactly on how you laugh because laughing makes you the happiest.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “When I laugh, I am enjoying life and picking the good things and emphasizing them over the bad. Laugh…Read More -
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My favorite word is loyalty because showing loyalty makes you earn a lot of respect from everyone. Many people pretend to be loyal to others but really ain’t loyal at all. I would pick loyalty over love any d
Read MoreMy favorite word is loyalty because showing loyalty makes you earn a lot of respect from everyone. Many people pretend to be loyal to others but really ain't loyal at all. I would pick loyalty over love any day. People can love...
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Dear Orlando,
I am really proud of you about the beat you made because not everyone has the talent you have when it comes to making beats.
(video/painting/drawing/photograph/collage/work of art/music, called “RPG300,”
Because most people would love to know how to make beats like you.
One part of your song that stands out for me is
Where you sta…Read More -
Idrissa commented on the post, Do you think wild animals should be caught?
Dear Heriberto I agree with your post about allowing all animals to be freed because people be Treating animals like they are slaves and killing Them. But you can’t eat meat without killing an animal so therefor many people have reasons for killing animals but you are still right.
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In the fourth section of The Old Man and the Sea, the old man was trying to catch a heavy and sharp fish, but the fish kept circling slowly and the old man was wet with sweat and tired deep into his bones two
Read MoreIn the fourth section of The Old Man and the Sea, the old man was trying to catch a heavy and sharp fish, but the fish kept circling slowly and the old man was wet with sweat and tired...
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Dear Idrissa,
I am curious about your post, “Loyalty Over Love”, and to why you were aspired to write about the importance between the differences of these two words. I agree with you that loyalty should be a long-term want for relationships with other people. I also agree that loyalty is a sign of respect and it is important to want those who are important to you to have your respect.
One sentence you wrote that stood out to me is, “Loyalty and love are not the same and never will be.” I slightly disagree with this statement because regarding the differences between these two words I believe that a person’s loyalty comes from within their love for you, so in a way loyalty and love do correlate.
Thank you for this writing. I look forward to what your next writing is, because I like how you elaborate words that some may find hard to contrast. I would like you to continue writing about your opinions for those who might find your opinions relatable.
Aaliyah