• Dear Ocasio-Cortez,

    I am very thoughtful about the video you uploaded on Instagram about the young generation being badass. It is great to see you argue that teenagers are brave when they advocate for

  • Dear Yeanoor,

    I am very much connected and agree with what you are saying about “Today’s Children, Tomorrow’s Future” because you clearly stated that youth people have the courage to speak up for themselves and that teenagers and they are utilizing what happened in history as a tool to change what is happening in the actuality.
    One set of…[Read more]

  • Dear Khadija,

    I am thoughtful about your discussion ” AOC Thanks for giving Honors To the Youth Generation!” because it expresses how our voices may impact the society that we live in and by speaking up about the issues that remain in our society, we are the change to it . It is the most helpful way to be heard by others.

    One of the set of…[Read more]

  • Dear Erica,

    I am impressed by your post ” Lack of Education inside the Juvenile Justice System creates an Endless Cycle” because people were restrained from receiving the quality education that they wanted , aimed for and on top of that it was very difficult for them to graduate .

    One sentence that you wrote that stand out for me is in…[Read more]

  • Dear Eros,

    I am very thoughtful about your story “Contradictions that make a beautiful piece of writing” because sometimes is optimal to also look at the other side of the page without judgments and you were conscious about how each one was supposed to act n their shoes.
    One of the set of lines that I felt very attracted towards,was ” The…[Read more]

  • Dear Hanna,

    I feel very thoughtful about your story, “Struggle of minorities” because you highlight how because of education is that many times people of color do not get the education that they either want or deserve and you talk about the criticism that is happening as a major issue in society due to Black people.
    One set of lines that…[Read more]

  • Dear Isaac,

    I am impressed by your story about ” The Discovery of my felt sense” because you explain very detailed how the three stories show similarities among each other. You also reflect how the stories highlight Black people in all three.

    One of the set of lines that stood out for me were ” Imagery is used to appreciate the appearance…[Read more]

  • Education is what formalizes humans, what is hard, is to remain being educated and listen to others.  In the three short stories, “Everyday Use” by Alice Walker, “The Lesson” by Toni Cade Bambara and “How to

    • Dear Idelkys,,
      I am Choose an adjective graceful to show you my emotion that I feel when I read your story, “Learning for Life,”. Your summary story was too emotional for me because it was much realist and had a great thought about the three stories the way that all authors describe how education is the key of life.
      One line that stands out for me is, “He puts her as the most special daughter in her life. At the same time, the mother is not interested to talk about Maggie and slightly talks about her tough out the story. ” I think this evidence is interesting because it conveys how much a mother can hide her feelings in different ways and make you think about that and get experience of life lessons. Since she is not easy for her, it can not be easy for you ,that’s why they like to put us to the test.
      Another sentence that stands out for me and it is fascinating is, “She has fought many times to give them both education sacrificed even her life to see them to the point that they are.” This stood out for me because it is true and i’m argue with you since if your mother doesn’t like you she will not give birth to you . Since it is like each to hold a baby until 9 month in your stomach if she did it is because she has objectif for you to become someone great.
      Your story helps me to understand well the three stories and one of the stories that I once read in Africa call “children like to play a lot with fire” that also talk about the abuse of children on their mother despite all things that their parents are doing with them for can succeed when they grow up. Since life is a challenge.
      Thanks for your summary of three stories. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Since I really enjoy reading your written style and it helps me to open my mind about our society even though sometimes it is really hard for us to accept everything . But I wonder if next time you can give us a deep conclusion? For more explanation, thank you.

    • Dear Idelkys
      I am writing to you to demonstrate my gratitude and my feeling about your story, “Learning for Life ” because your story is the one that was really sensational. Also, your story is really logical and shows more though about what the writers want to say.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “it can be seen that in actual life parents invest all of what they sometimes tend to have, in order to race their kids with education and all affordable resources and comfort for themselves.” I think this is engaging because it explains how the parents take care of their children’s education. In addition, they offer them all the possibilities to have access to the funds and allow them to be comfortable in order to succeed. Another sentence that I was“” This stood out for me because it was really hard for Maggie who is willing to listen her mother however her mother was not willing to listen her like. At contrary her support Dee more than Maggie. I think she like to read a lot of books and writng a lot essay to improev her writing. I saw this in Africa fairy tale. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I really like hoew you write and devolop different lietrary element. Also, your style of writing is very incredible and let me without voice.

    • I am fascinated with your story, because you really showed the differences between the three stories. You explained the importance of education and how some the kids in “The Lesson” were not taking it seriously and at the end they realize that a person without education it’s just a bird without wings. This paragraph really caught my attention, “In everyday Use, Dee ignores the sacrifices that the mother made for her and just cares about her own convenience. Ignorance is also seen when the mother most of the time highlights Dee. She puts her as the most special daughter in her life. At the same time, the mother is not interested in talking about Maggie and slightly talks about her tough out the story”. Because sometimes mothers do not see the sacrifice the other daughters do. They just pick who they love the most and not compare them with anyone. Most of them do not realize the consequences at the end. Mama kept on ignoring Maggie and did not care how much was hurt. Another sentence that really connected to the one on the top. Which is In The Lesson, the ignorance of the kids towards Ms. Moore is shown in several parts of the story. The kids in the “The Lesson” were not paying attention to Miss Moree. They did not see the effort that Miss Moree was putting to help them see the reality of the society. Thank you for writing this short story and I look forwards to read what you will writ next.

    • Dear Idelkys,
      I was really amazed by the way you wrote your analysis about the three stories that you entitled “Learning for Life” because there are some really highlighted parts that makes your analysis really powerful. The first part is when you talked about the theme of the three stories. To be more specific you mentioned “the sacrifices that the mother made about Maggie and Dee. Furthermore, she potentially gave all of herself to see them to the age that they are already. She has fought many times to give them both education and sacrificed even her life to see them to the point that they are”. To me that is the duty of a mother to make sacrifices for her childs and be around and see what it turns out to be. The second things you mentioned is “Maggie is open to listen to the Mom’s advices but her Mom ignores her when it comes to be less beautiful, she uses voice to express in an educational Matter how Maggie is supposed to be in comparison with Dee” What you said here really powerful because so many people are more comfortable of topics that they are comfortable of talking. The third thing that you mentioned was “ In addition, it can be seen that in actual life parents invest all of what they sometimes tend to have, in order to race their kids with education and all affordable resources and comfort for themselves”. Nowadays childrens don’t realise how hard the parents work to support and so they end up not appreciating or less appreciating what their parents are doing for them. Thank you for your analysis of “Learning for Life” . I am really looking forward to seeing what you will accomplish next.

    • Dear Idelyks,

      I am fascinated by your literary analysis of the three stories. You summarized the three stories in a concise manner.

      One sentence that stands out for me. “her Mom ignores her when it comes to being less beautiful, she uses voice to express in an educational Matter how Maggie is supposed to be in comparison with Dee.” because it shows persistence and dedication.

      Your analysis helped me to understand the three stories better. Also, you brought a different perspective to my overall understanding of the three stories.

      I look forward to seeing another phenomenal piece of writing.

  • Dear Emely,

    I am very astonished by your story “Mom’s Obligation”. I really like your story because you get to show the piety from the Mother, the sacrifices that she did in order to race their children and the time that she dedicates in order to race them , and the way behind of how you describe every single moment happening in the family.…[Read more]

  • I feel astonished because people who tend to be in situations where they do not consider the tragedies that have happened already, will to cause more problems such as suicide, when they should really contribute for the solution of the problem. What i infer by this type of action is that most of his life really depended on those who did before him.…[Read more]

  • Dear Issaka,

    I am impressed by how you shorten the story of “Everyday Use” by Alice Walker in a very compelling way. It really shows how Dee sees the family in someway and I like how you emphasize how poverty is the main problem of the family division, especially in the case of Dee. It is also impressive how you talk about the efforts that the…[Read more]

  • Dear Oumi,

    I am astonished in the way that you narrate the story from the side of Maggie and Dee’s Mother. It shows the
    that the mother could not value Dee the same way since she let trust in neither of them. Dee’s Mother slightly shows deception of her daughter Dee in having left her because Dee wanted to have a different type of life tha…[Read more]

  • I feel astonished because people who tend to be in situations where they do not consider the tragedies that have happened already, will to cause more problems such as suicide, when they should really contribute for the solution of the problem. What i infer by this type of action is that most of his life really depended on those who did before him.…[Read more]

  • I don’t have the blame to pass throughout that fire. I honestly feel ashamed in the way that I make my mother remember the past of that burned house when I was younger.

    I am very conscious that my mother

    • Beloved Idelkys,
      I am Inspired about your short story “Young sister cries telling her Family experience after her hands were Burned”, because the way you expressed how Maggie would feel personally towards her mother and how her tragedy affected her life. What most attracted my attention is that even she knows her mother does not feel so much affection but she still glad that her sister is being loved. I feel so emotional that Maggie is not getting what she deserved but she did not blame anyone for it. This is the paragraph that stands out for me, “Dear Dee, I just want to let you know that the things that seem to be insignificant for you tend to matter a lot, such as when you did not care when Mom gave me the quarantines. I hope this precedent would not provoke you any negative feeling for the future, yet I will be a hundred percent sure that you have not felt as you felt before it even happen. Welcome to my world”, because this shows how Maggie is selfless and caring towards her family even though she is not getting the same from them. She still has hope that everything would go to normal back again. There is another sentence that really caught my eye is “ I just can’t agree with seeing any member of my family as sad as I feel right now,” because this demonstrates that Maggie is finding ways to bring back the family not to act like them, she knows it would decrease the love that her mother feels for her. Even though sometimes she feels like she does not belong to the world, however she finds ways to make the family better. Your story reminds me one of neighborhoods that I had back in my county, there used to be sisters lived next to our house, the younger sister got married early. The eldest thought that maybe no one pays attention to her that’s why. On the other she also thinks that perhaps is that she was destined to live like that or a better one afterwards. I appreciate you writing this story, because I have learned so much in it. I can see that there are some people who think differently, even though they are the most hurt. They try to control how they feel to not blame innocent people. I hope to read more about your stories.

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