The story was written really well, I wanted to keep reading to reach the conclusion. It really made me think about how saying “I hate you,” can have such a large impact. Mothers give a lot and I know what it feels like to have that hatred for stupid reasons. The dream sequence was good, I believed it was the real event until you woke up and saw the truth. Thank you for such a powerful message.

I like how you didn’t tell us it was a dream so when you realized it was a dream in the story we also were surprised. It makes me think about how everything I say can have an impact.

This story was amazing. It really brought a different perspective into my head. Glad to find out it was a dream.

Husnain,

Thank you for sharing your story of how you immigrated to the U.S. from Canada. My parents also immigrated from Canada, and I am a dual citizen of both countries as well. There is definitely few differences between the two countries as both have similar cultures, but I have found that even though discrimination exists everywhere, it is definitely more prevalent and harsh in the U.S. I believe that the U.S. has stronger disparities between races than Canada, and Canada seems to be more accepting of immigrants. I do believe that improvements need to be made regarding racial bias in the U.S., and I believe this can be attained through a nationwide effort to be more inclusive of others.

Here is an interesting article regarding how Trump is making it harder for Canadians to immigrate to the U.S.
https://www.thestar.com/news/world/2018/01/12/trump-is-also-making-it-harder-for-canadians-to-legally-immigrate-to-the-us-lawyers-say.html

Hope to see what you write next,

Bella

Hello
I really liked your entire post, even though I dont have a lot in common with you I think that your story is very inspirational. I think in our society it is key to be hardworking even if you are not naturally good at a lot of things. I think that hard work can get you almost anywhere in the world even if you are not that talented at it.
I think you would like this article on why hard work is the greatest characteristic to have.
https://medium.com/the-mission/hard-work-is-the-single-greatest-competitive-advantage-8e65a1e674f4

Hi Husnain,

I thought that your post is very motivational. I have actually never immigrated or moved anywhere before. Sharing your story was really brave of you!

Here is a link to other people’s immigration stories: https://www.forbes.com/sites/stuartanderson/2019/12/11/the-most-inspiring-immigration-stories-of-2019/#28021f7615c6

Have a good one! Stay safe and Healthy!
-Carter

Hi Hussain, I just wanted to say I can really relate to your story! I also emigrated from the Toronto area of Canada. While I can’t relate to the same name-calling circumstances, I have been teased for my accent and my unique hair color. I also just wanted to say just how much that whole immigrant issue affects me still with all sorts of paperwork for every little thing.

Hi Husnain,

Thank you for writing this piece, it really goes to show that the problems regarding differences in races, religions, and creeds still divides the people of this country. It is a perfect demonstration of one of the many injustices that occur to minority groups every day.