• The important thing to know about me is that I like to play around with the people and I like to make people happy and I love when they laugh because of me. I was born in July, 23 and I used to lived in South

  • I also like to go to the mela. i think that you enjoyed so much. and i hope that was nice mela.

  • i like how you imagine about tree and building and how they talking. and how they think positive.

  • I like how you imagine about the tree and building and how they talking. And i like that how your imagine positive. And think that they also thinking positive.

  • Boy: Do you like here ?

     

    Girl: yes , I like to come here. Infact, I love to come here and I love this bridge.

           How about you ? do you like it here ?

     

    Boy:  yeah, I like it too. Why do yo

    • I like this conversation between those guys because they are describing how that bridge make them feel in peace.

    • Dear Humera,

      I am excited about your story “Bridge,” because it makes me think of how famous it must be that so many people come there.

      One part of your story that stands out for me is where you describe that you can feel fresh air. I think this is true because that is why many people should be coming over there and THAT IS WHY I go.

      Another part that I enjoyed is where you choose two characters. This stood out for me because_it shows what might people be talking about.

      Your story reminds me of something that I made once. One time, I went their with my family and there were talking just like that.

      Thanks for your story I look forward to seeing what
      you make next, because it was very interesting.

      Best wishes with your art!

    • I like this conversation because they are describing how that bridge make them feel with it beautiful structure

    • i think u should have added a bit more information but its interesting

    • very nice story and its short but perfect.

    • Dear humera,
      One part of your dialogue that stands out for me is
      where you tell us benefit of bridge.
      Another part that I enjoyed is where you describe the beauty of bridge.Why do you like to come here ?. This stood out for me
      Because this is to know someone feedback how they think about the place.
      Your video reminds me of something that I made
      once. One time that i talk about bridge dialogue_
      Thanks for your dialogue I look forward to seeing what
      you make next, because _i like the way you make the dialogue and also how the ask question
      Best wishes with your art,
      Ayesha

    • I adore this. It’s so short but there’s so much emotion. The relationship (whether platonic or romantic) between the two characters is so subtle, yet so beautifully bright. I aspire to write something like this one day.

  • I am from that place when I drive bicycle first time and I fall down so badly.

    I left my parents where I am from

    I am from the silent place that no one comes to

    and  the police station next to that

    • i think your is very great fun and describes you the way you are. One thing I like is when you said ”
      I am from “don’t trust Manjras” and “Topias are Intelligent.”
      because your describe the intelligent and I liked then your have trust

    • Dear Humera,
      Wow, this poem is really moving. You use images that help me picture where you’re from, and that also make me have questions and want to learn more. The first two lines of the poem are powerful: “I am from that place when I drive bicycle first time and I fall down so badly. / I left my parents where I am from.” Each of these lines shows a hard moment; one is much deeper than the other, but they both feel so real. Thank you for sharing such a personal poem.

      Ada

    • This is a very powerful poem. Thanks for sharing it. I feel like I know you a little bit from having read it.

      (PS I used to have a good friend named Humera. She became a doctor. Also I love biryaani!)

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  • I am sad about Willie Perdomo’s poem, “Where I’m from” because the police came to in his house without knocking on the door and they shoot his dad for no reason.
    One part of his poem that stands out for me is w

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