Huiwen Li commented on the post, My sweet inside origin
Dear Tania Gutama:
I’m really interesting about your poem. From your poem I can understand story that happen in your daily life. It’s amazing for how I can see your story by reading your poem. Hope I can read more your writing for how interesting it is.
I am from building blocks and candy jar with no candy in it,
from baby dolls and a piggy bank.
I am from the room being attacked by a storm.
and moist to moist to moist.
I am from the silk f1 Comment
Huiwen Li commented on the post, Benefit of Higher Education
This is an really interesting topic for researching. From your writing I realize what education really affecting is your life attitude, and that’s how it affect us.
Are humans really dealing with their past mistakes?
This question is very appealing to me because humanity is always an interesting topic to discover, for how easy it can break and how easy it can be forgotten.2 Comments
Thanks smiley, I like you wrote by this sentence ”From all this, I see nothing about deal with mistake, I see another mistake build over another mistake. Maybe this is a sensitive topic to research, but they should be remember and live under justice.” it’s right because another mistake will come it up, and mistakes should be fix.
dear Huiwen Li,
I am amazed about your post, Mistakes Over A Mistake, because it makes the reader realize all the wrong they may have done, it is so thoughtful to write about that cruelty caused by a human to his likeness. i think you show how inhuman it can be. and introduced us to the relief an apology can bring.
one sentence you wrote that really stood out for me is “This question is very appealing to me because humanity is always an interesting topic to discover, for how easy it can break and how easy it can be forgotten.” this is so considerate and so true, despite the fact that it shows how ignorant some people can be. mistakes are easily made and people don’t even realize how hurt you can be .
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you express your thoughts clearly and reveal the facts hidden.
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I liked how you used descriptive words to help me visualize what you were talking about. I also enjoyed the way you used dialogue.