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  • housseynatoud

Precious Fatoumata, I am so delighted by your letter to AOC “Motivating Youth Activists To Advocate For Their Future” because it really caught my attention and the way you talked about how the AOC motivates youth to fight for their rights. Most importantly when youth read this letter they will...

Racial Wealth Gap and Education View Comment
  • @housseynatoud
  • February 6, 2020

Dear El-Hassan I am compassionate with your story because it really stands out for me and people can just read the first paragraph and understand what you are going to talk about in the essay. Maggie’s family were really struggling when it comes to education and living status. This sentence...

Struggles of Minorities View Comment
  • @housseynatoud
  • February 6, 2020

Beloved Hanna, I am touched with the language you used to explain how minorities are suffering from the society. Especially the black people who suffered the most because they are black and poor. Sometimes it looks like they are isolated from society. This paragraph really helped me to see being...

Learning for Life View Comment
  • @housseynatoud
  • February 6, 2020

I am fascinated with your story, because you really showed the differences between the three stories. You explained the importance of education and how some the kids in “The Lesson” were not taking it seriously and at the end they realize that a person without education it’s just a...

Success isn’t important but attitude is View Comment
  • @housseynatoud
  • December 11, 2019

Precious Oumy I am very impresionante with your story “Success isn’t Important but Attitudes is” because you really told what some families have and no one has the courage to tell them how they are supposed to treat outsiders. I think people should really say what’s bothering them...

Maggie’s Diary View Comment
  • @housseynatoud
  • December 11, 2019

Dearest Celine I am ecstatic with your short story “Maggie’s Diary”, because the method you kept the story so simple and how you can understand every character’s emotion through Maggie’s words or perspectives. I am glorious with the techniques that you used your first paragraph a peaceful imagery that could...

Beloved Idelkys, I am Inspired about your short story “Young sister cries telling her Family experience after her hands were Burned”, because the way you expressed how Maggie would feel personally towards her mother and how her tragedy affected her life. What most attracted my attention is that...

My true feelings View Comment
  • @housseynatoud
  • December 11, 2019

Dear Eros I am so sensitive about your letter, “My True Feelings” because not a lot of people are honest when it comes to how they feel about certain things. In this letter you showed how a true talks about when they see unfairness happens. Maggie wanted to have...

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