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  • Madison, I think you’ve made a really good point because school isn’t about learning anymore it revolves around passing. I feel that now my entire life revolves around my grades on whether I’m passing or not like I cant do extracurriculars unless you have at least this grade, you can’t go to college if you don’t have good grades, or even I can’t…Read More

  • I think there are some major issues regarding racial injustice like you were saying and they most definitely do need to change no matter how hard it is or how long it takes. Our country needs to change because innocent people shouldn’t be losing their lives because they are a different race and people of color should be treated as equals not…Read More

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  • I agree with you. Everyone does highlight different parts of the story because they don’t like it even if it isn’t the whole truth or even the truth at all. Everyone always just blames things being the way they are on each other and it’s making things worse even if they say they are making the situation better. And as Jyothika said “we are missing…Read More

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    Being American

    The meaning of being American means so many different things to so many different people and to every single person it means something different. To me personally being American means having freedom of speech and being able to protest...

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    • I very much agree with you and how being an American can mean different things to may different people. I liked how you used an article for a source as well as using a personal example. Your whole writing was really well done!

    • Holly,
      I agree with the values that you talked about in your writing. I also used a personal example about my family in my writing, because they came over from Germany. How you say that anyone can be an American even if they aren’t born here is important. I think you should look into how the American dream is something that is difficult for many people of color, because they can be put at different disadvantages. This is well written and thank you for your writing!

    • I agree with what you wrote Holly. Being American means so many things for everyone, its different for each and everyone one of us. I included a lot of this in my essay too I thought it was a big point that was needed. Your essay is really well done, good work!

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