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    Cole commented on the post, Expressing Myself

    Quan,
    I love the rhythm that you have written into this poem. I think a lot of kids who are tossed in to a new school also struggle with finding where they fit in. You make a good point in just finding who you are and being yourself. If you try to change yourself and be like everyone else you are not going to feel comfortable in your own body. If…Read More

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    Cole commented on the post, ISO Giovanni

    I love this poem and your choice of adjectives that describe the different elements in a season. My favorite line is “flowers resurrected an animals awaken” it makes me thing of a bear breaking out of its den after a “frigid winter”. Great job!!

  • I agree with you that women should be paid equal to men, not only in the medical field but in any sort of work place. Women are capable of doing the exact thing as men in todays time and age. I find it interesting how women are paid more in the field of radiology compared to men but paid less in other fields. After all of the excruciating work and…Read More

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    Cole Hetrick

    I.S.O Giovanni

    Alaskan River

     

    The river rushed between my legs

    while i looked around

    to see the flash of trout

    beneath me

    and off in the distance

    a large splash

    as a

    Alaskan River

    Cole Hetrick I.S.O Giovanni Alaskan River   The river rushed between my legs while i looked around to see the flash of trout beneath me and off in the distance a large splash as a bear was chasing after salmon that were swimming for their life      

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    • Hey Cole! I really enjoyed reading your poem. While looking up at the bear and then continuing to read your poem, I felt like I was watching this encounter in the wild unfold myself! I really like this writing, it’s simple but meaningful. If you ever feel like publishing a poem here’s a website that has more information that you should look into: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/submit

    • Hey Cole,
      I enjoyed your poem. I always love reading poems about nature, especially from perspectives of animals and plants. I think these poems help somewhat connect us to organisms we always see yet not really understand what they go through. I would love to read more poems!

    • This is a really great poem Cole. Very relaxing and vivid. It reminds me of this website (explore.org) that has webcams of bears fishing for salmon in Alaska. Obviously the bears are hibernating right now, but it’s fun to watch in the warmer months. Great work, I look forward to more.

    • Cole,
      This is a very good poem. It really allows me to visualize the picture that you are presenting. It really allowed me to see the bear fishing within the river. This was a very good poem and I think that you have the ability to write a number of more poems as good as this one.
      Good work,
      Zach

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    Dear Legislature

     

    A very important issue in our society that doesn’t get a lot of attention is the gender pay gap. Women in America earn about 20% less than men right now earning 77 cents for every dollar th

    Equal Pay Phase 5

    Dear Legislature   A very important issue in our society that doesn’t get a lot of attention is the gender pay gap. Women in America earn about 20% less than men right now earning 77 cents for every dollar their counterpart...

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