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  • Until now the plot in upfront reminds me of something that happens in my good city happened before because right now where I lived in Mexico and they imposed the law that animals should not be killed reminds me

    Do you think wild animals should be caught?

    Until now the plot in upfront reminds me of something that happens in my good city happened before because right now where I lived in Mexico and they imposed the law that animals should not be killed reminds me...

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    • Dear Heriberto I agree with your post about allowing all animals to be freed because people be Treating animals like they are slaves and killing Them. But you can’t eat meat without killing an animal so therefor many people have reasons for killing animals but you are still right.

    • Dear Heriberto:

      I agree with your post about allowing all animals to be freed because people be Treating animals like they are slaves. But you can’t eat meat without killing an animal so therefor many people have reasons for killing animals but other person kill the animals only for fun because they feel that they are champion when they really are the animal doing this kind of things.

    • Dear Heriberto:

      I agree with your post about allowing all animals to be freed because people be treating animals like as slaves. But a animal cannot eat meat without killing an animal because they have instincts so therefor many people have reasons for killing animals but other person kill the animals only for fun because they feel that they are champion when they really are the animal doing this kind of things.

    • Dear Heriberto:

      I am surprised by your post, “Do you think wild animals should be caught ?,” because I like that topic. I think it is good like the law that animals should not be killed, because they don’t have to kill animals if they don’t do anything to them.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I think they should be free to enjoy and run.” I think is awesome because they need to be free, nobody has to kill them. The animals are free.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I like this topic. I think it’s very interesting to know about animals and how there are many laws so they don’t kill them.

      Samantha

    • Hi Heriberto,
      Your summary was interesting. You have a good point about animals being killed or being taken as pets not being a good thing. In my biology class last year I learned about the genetics in dogs. I, for one love dogs and have two at home. It was shocking to hear that humans have genetically domesticated and transformed dogs to fit our needs. I feel bad but at the same time I am grateful to have my two dogs in my life. I could never part from them. Here is a link to the video where I learned about genetics in dogs, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T0wV2Xj7pd8
      -Cora

    • Hi Heriberto, I agree with you one hundred percent. Wild animals should not be killed. They also should not be ripped from their homes to be put in zoos or killed. This is why so many animals are going to extinct. We must protect them, not put them in cages or kill them for their aspects. It is a horrible problem that needs to stop.

    • Dear Heriberto,
      I do agree with you on how animals should not be killed. Animal cruelty is not good at all and I hope that it stops. In the first paragraph it quotes, “Until now the plot in upfront reminds me of something that happens in my good city happened before because right now where I lived in Mexico and they imposed the law that animals should not be killed reminds me of this because also in the United States they killed animals That is why there are not as many as before they sometimes caught them as pets”. I feel like most wild animals that are caught to tend to become pets. Loved your article and I hope to read more from you soon!

  • So far in the plot in “Frankenstein” reminds me that on Halloween people dressed as frankenstein. You remind me of this because in several states they dress as frankenstein. Another thing that reminds me is that

    Frankenstein's story

    So far in the plot in "Frankenstein" reminds me that on Halloween people dressed as frankenstein. You remind me of this because in several states they dress as frankenstein. Another thing that reminds me is that in the movies...

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    • Dear Heriberto:

      I am happy by your post, ”Frankenstein’s story”, because I like that you talk about him since he is a very recognized character. He is a character that I like very much besides that when there are movies of him his character is very good.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Otra cosa que me recuerda es que en las películas actúan tan bien como él.” I think this is fabulous because they highlight the character of Frankenstein in many films.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I would like you to tell me what movies there are of him so that I can see them because I have seen but not all. I would also like you to talk more about him so you can tell me how his name came about, how this character came to light.

    • Dear Heriberto,

      Estoy admirada con tu publicación ” Frankenstein” porque me gustan cosas asi como de terror y como más parecido a los zombis y eso a mi me encanta .

      Una frase que escribistes que se destaca para mi es donde dice ” en Halloween la gente se vestía de frankenstein” porque me gusta mucho las personas que se visten de diferentes personajes incluso a mi me gusta vestirme de personajes así.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque quisiera saber mas sobre ese personaje. En verdad te gusta Frankenstein?

      Deysi

    • Dear Heriberto:
      I am surprised by your post, ”Frankenstein’s story”because this character is very famous in the world of tirer. He is a character that I like because he scare the people easily.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Otra cosa que me recuerda es que en las películas actúan tan bien como él.” I think this is awesome because they highlight the character of Frankenstein in a lot of films.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I would like you to tell me more about the book from this famous character . I would also like you to talk more about him so you can tell me how his name came about, how this character came to light.

  • So far in the plot I went to my cousins’ house then we went to play soccer and then he flew and they sent me for him and I ran and I fell down and I did not notice and I stumbled over a rock in one day in the

    UN DIA CON MIS PRIMOS

    So far in the plot I went to my cousins' house then we went to play soccer and then he flew and they sent me for him and I ran and I fell down and I did not notice...

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  • Hasta ahora el trama en Sea Life ay animales en el mar que a veces mueren porque nosotros los humanos no cuidamos el océano. Me recuerda a esto porque en mi país las personas no cuidan el océano ni los pe

    Sea Life

    Hasta ahora el trama en Sea Life ay animales en el mar que a veces mueren porque nosotros los humanos no cuidamos el océano. Me recuerda a esto porque en mi país las personas no cuidan el océano ni...

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  • Hasta ahora  la tram en TSUNAMI  me recuerda a mi mundo. La trama me recuerda a esto porque en venezuela tan bien pasó un TSUNAMI y murió mucha gente inocente. Y mi libro se me hizo similar  al país de venez

    Los tsunami

    Hasta ahora  la tram en TSUNAMI  me recuerda a mi mundo. La trama me recuerda a esto porque en venezuela tan bien pasó un TSUNAMI y murió mucha gente inocente. Y mi libro se me hizo similar  al país...

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  • So far the plot The Long Road Home reminds me of the dunes of the state of Mexico that there is no. The plot reminds me of this because almost all hunters kill deer. This is similar to the book because sometimes

    The protected animals

    So far the plot The Long Road Home reminds me of the dunes of the state of Mexico that there is no. The plot reminds me of this because almost all hunters kill deer. This is similar to the...

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  • So far, the canine helpers plot reminds me of something I experience from a dog. Something that happened to me is that I bit a dog in the right leg is something similar to the book because it is the most dangerous

    The trained dogs

    So far, the canine helpers plot reminds me of something I experience from a dog. Something that happened to me is that I bit a dog in the right leg is something similar to the book because it is...

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  • So far the plot in Underwater Animals reminds me of something that happened in my community because in my community the animals of the ocean are also dying. The plot reminds me because in the community people

    The animals in extinction

    So far the plot in Underwater Animals reminds me of something that happened in my community because in my community the animals of the ocean are also dying. The plot reminds me because in the community people kill the...

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    • Estimado Heriberto:

      Estoy muy feliz por tu publicación, “Underwater Animals”, porque me gusta que le abras los ojos a las persona, de que se den cuenta de lo que están haciendo. De que vean que los animales no son objetos son seres vivos igual que nosotros.

      Una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es: “The animals are in danger of extinction”. Creo que esto es triste porque los animales no merecen ser lastimados. Y además los animales se están extinguiendo por culpa de los humano.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque me gusta que hables de los animales, ya que son muy importantes en nuestra vida porque sin ellos no existieramos haci de facil. Además las personas no saben que por culpa de los humanos hay muchos animales en extinción y si no hacemos algo también nos extinguiremos nosotros.

  • So for the centro idea in Holocaust Rescuers reminds me of something I see hier was that president they fought to stay like president. There or thing happening they say that vote for me  and they are going to be

    Holocaust Rescuers

    So for the centro idea in Holocaust Rescuers reminds me of something I see hier was that president they fought to stay like president. There or thing happening they say that vote for me  and they are going to...

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    • Estimado Heriberto Cardenas

      Me parece muy interesante su publicación espero que sigas haciendo mas de tas escrituras . 😊😊

  • So far the central idea in CONFLICT IN THE AMERICAN WEST It reminds me something i saw in a movie  always they had a lot of wars for things that did not want  the soldiers they don’t what relations and the peo

    Guerras sin triunfo

    So far the central idea in CONFLICT IN THE AMERICAN WEST It reminds me something i saw in a movie  always they had a lot of wars for things that did not want  the soldiers they don’t what relations...

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    • Hi Heriberto,
      War is such a powerful topic. I’d like to hear more about how religion is involved in the war that you are reading about.

      Ms. Navarro

  • So far the central idea in Paul Revere and the American Revolution reminds me of a movie I see on television. In the revolution there were many wars fighting other small cities. “He recorded the shooting and many

    Guerras

    So far the central idea in Paul Revere and the American Revolution reminds me of a movie I see on television. In the revolution there were many wars fighting other small cities. "He recorded the shooting and many people saw...

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  • So far, the central idea in Afforestation of Trees reminds  me of the world because every time I tear a leaf out of my notebook, I remember cutting a tree was necessary to use this notebook. Also, when I start

    We need to save our trees

    So far, the central idea in Afforestation of Trees reminds  me of the world because every time I tear a leaf out of my notebook, I remember cutting a tree was necessary to use this notebook. Also, when I...

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