The sentence that caught my attention was”I dedicate myself to helping the people most needy”. This is interesting to me because you are doing somethings good in life. Very few people help others persons.
The sentence that caught my attention was ” I am sad that Because my mother lives there”. This is interesting to me because I understand how to you feel, you want to be with your mother. I feel sad, too because my father, grandmother and me don’t are together, I miss them.
This sentence that caught my attention was “there was some girls that were saying that they wanted to fight a girl”. This is interesting to me because you talk about of the injustice and the injustice is about the things bad of the life or world or the things bad that do the people. You understand that did the group of girls were very bad, that…[Read more]
Dear Haydee :
I am interesting in your story, “Haydee’s Biography,” because in paragraphs you tell us about your country and about your interesting dream.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I have lived in Provincia Monseñor Noel (Bonao), Santo Domingo.” I think this is interesting for me because you tell what the name of your city.Another sentence that “ I am particularly good at singing because I like to sing”: This stood out for me because you should add more details about your dreams.
Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time when i was immigrated my life was changed totally.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your story is very interesting and you gives us lesson about justice .
This is a youth-powered social network that was started in 2003 by a group of teachers from local sites of the National Writing Project.
We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It's easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other's work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it's been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
If being part of such a community makes sense to you, we invite you to join us. We welcome all youth and any teacher interested in having students publish online and participate in the give and take of a social network like Youth Voices.