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  • I agree with you because amercia make Weapons of mass destruction for Subjugation of the Japanese But many innocent people were killed.

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    Hassan commented on the post, Brooklyn Bridge

    Dear Kliton:

    I am impressed by the wonderful picture you have taken. Because it shows its magnificence building a great bridge.

    One part of your store that stands out for me is where you give a description for people to know more about this bridge. I think this is good idea because maybe some people they don’t konw about this bridge when you…Read More

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    Location: Bronx NY

     

    The summer came with the great rain to wash the earth. The trees and flowers sprout and the rainbow appears to spread hope throughout the earth.

     

    This picture makes me feel comfortable, h

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    Location: Bronx NY   The summer came with the great rain to wash the earth. The trees and flowers sprout and the rainbow appears to spread hope throughout the earth.   This picture makes me feel comfortable, hopeful and comfortable.

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    • I’m really like your poem. And I know you are a poet.

    • I love your sentence,it’s really beautiful.

    • Your did a great job. I like your poem and your picture. Your poem and picture linked each other. Everything looks very beautiful.

    • Dear Hassan,

      Thanks for this poem about the rainbow. I really like how you repeated the word “earth” so that it sounds like a rhyming poem. The affected me because it is simple and makes it a poem.

      I can’t wait to read more of your writing! Best of luck!

      Louise

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