I love your dedication and aspirations for HSHMC . You are role model for people who liked to contribute to their community even after they move onto a new life . I am curious about your love of teaching. I would like to know how teaching impact your life? Asdie from that i really enjoyed learning about your itinerary to your dreams…[Read more]
I really enjoyed reading your poem “Dear Baby Polar Bear” because you conveyed your thoughts in a playful yet empathetic way. You ended your poem with a message that shows how you are willing to advocate for the damages that climate change causes. That stresses that you are concerned about our planet.
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I am fascinated by the way you compared and contrasted the three short stories. You took a specific details from each story and you elaborated on how they all convey the issue about race and wealth in the American community.
One thing that stands out for me was your word choices and descriptive writing to show the wealth…[Read more]
We decided as a class to nominate three short stories to read which is “The lesson” and “Everyday use” and “How to date brown girl , white girl ….”. Those three stories were chosen by our class because they
I am really impressed how you analyse the three stories “Struggles of Minorities,” because you used all of them to show how minorities faced their problem everyday life. One paragraph that stands out for me is, you introduced your three stories by explain why you are doing this analysis and what make chose the stories. It’s very clear and clever. Another line set of lines that stands out for me is, “ The issues that the United States face has to be addressed and everybody has to speak up . Therefore, people can be more aware of the existing problems in the U.S . The more that people speak up the more that we have awareness and problems can be solved.” I think those line are really true because It’s always important to speak up and It’s could changes a lot of life. Thanks for your this beautiful analysis. I look forward to seeing what you make next.
I am touched with the language you used to explain how minorities are suffering from the society. Especially the black people who suffered the most because they are black and poor. Sometimes it looks like they are isolated from society. This paragraph really helped me to see being poor can affect many people’s lives and to not have the privilege to education. “The “lesson ” is discussing how poverty affects the life of the kids from low-income class. They didn’t have the privilege to get an education because they were born and raised in the ghetto New York which reflects on their behavior from the way they talk to the way they behave and view their lives”. What Else the same thing happened to Dee because she had to sacrifice a lot to get the education that she was visualizing since her childhoodness. Your story is so inspiring and I really learned a lot from it. Additionally, I wish to read what you will be writing next time. Thank you.
I feel very thoughtful about your story, “Struggle of minorities” because you highlight how because of education is that many times people of color do not get the education that they either want or deserve and you talk about the criticism that is happening as a major issue in society due to Black people.
One set of lines that stand out about your story for me was the third paragraph is when you convicted how black people are undermined because they have no education and other people tend to talk bad about them. Many people do not actually understand that they do not have money to be educated. It is as a back and forth rule . People who tend to exige have to actually be aware that they need to also give to society.
Another set of lines that also stand out for me was in the second paragraph . You explained how most likely all of the characters seek for education at one point or another. They potentially face other people either because education played a huge role in between. All the three stories base themselves in having education as the main idea for everything. This story reminds me of many immigrants who come to this country and they do not always get the best education. It is conditional to understand that the main reason for why people do not tend to have what they want is because of money.
Thank you for sharing this story with me. I look forward to hearing more about your stories. I look forward to hearing more about your stories because in the actuality many people have forgotten that our system is how it is because there is not enough money for undermined groups and therefore people do not tend to have high levels of education
I am grateful for your literary analysis “Struggles of Minorities” because you describe the issues that happened in the U.S.A. The analysis shows the three texts that discuss specific things with examples on the perspective on life. These issues have specific details like facing the characters that narrates the author.
One set of the lines that stands out for me is “These issues are so important to be addressed because all humans deserve to get basic life necessities. Education should be a right for everyone and no one has to struggle to get this right”. This line has a strong lesson that people can be impact and change their minds. The corruption in the government causes the education and economy to have a lack of the social class that affect the middle and poor class.
Another sentence that I impacted was “It is also important to integrate different points of views and it’s important to live in an integrated society.”.This stood out for me because you explain a purpose on a specific group that is society. On resolution the idea is to bring other views or opinions about the struggle on our community and others communities.
Thanks for your post. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I hope you continue to post interesting analysis or texts like this one.
Dear HANNA :
I am shocked about, your letter, “Struggles of Minorities,” because of the kind. Your mention in your letter. Today we are doing everything to make our world better. We also know that one day we will have to give the sit the kids. But what if the kids are not even prepared. All the things we been doing will be equal to zero.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “They didn’t have the privilege to get an education because they were born and raised in the ghetto New York which reflects on their behavior from the way they talk to the way they behave and view their lives.” I think this is weird because I think It is not the fault of the kid but the fault of the parent. The parents have to bring the kids to school or show them that education is the most important thing in the world.
Another sentence that I saw and it was not correct was: “How to date a brown, white, black and half girl” is addressing a problem with social class and race insecurities.” This stood out for me because in this world people are different. Only according to their race but according to their behavior. A group of people may have different races and have behavior. That means learning how to date girls according to their race is useless in some cases.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.
I am really impressed how you analyse the three stories “Struggles of Minorities,” because you used all of them to show how minority is a real problem. One paragraph that stands out for me is, The issues that the United States face has to be addressed and everybody has to speak up . Therefore, people can be more aware of the existing problems in the U.S . The more that people speak up the more that we have awareness and problems can be solved.” because it denounces how equality in present our society. Another line set of lines that stands out for me is, “the story “How to date a brown ,white, black and halfie girl” is similar with the stories “The lesson ” and “Everyday use ” because they are all narrated from underrepresented point of view but ““How to date a brown ,white, black and halfie girl” is addressing a problem with social class and race insecurities and the author didn’t end the story with a resolution instead he is teaching us how to hide these insecurities and to be ashamed of who we are.” I think those lines are really important because it shows the difference between them . Thanks for your beautiful analysis. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I think you watch the movie now they see us because your writing remind me of that.
I am impressed by the way you composite your letter “The hardest letter to write ” because it shows the awaiting reunion between Maggie and her sister. It also shows how Maggie has changed and improved her life.
One line that stands out for me is “Hello Dee or I should call you Wangero? Whatever.” because it shows the disconnection…[Read more]
I am intrigued by your letter “My true feeling ” because it explains the difficulties that Maggie had to face due to the lack of support she received from her mother. I also admire your elaboration of the distinctive behavior that mama had toward Maggie.
One line that stands out for me is “Mama put you ahead of me and made me feel like…[Read more]
I like your story “It Is How I feel In Real Life” because it shows the insecurities that Maggie has to deal with due to her body scars.It also stresses on the power of words and how the words can deeply affect someone’s live. One line that stands out for me is ” I am someone who is barely recognized or even noticed by the world…[Read more]
I am fascinated with your short story, “Dee and the Quilts,” because related a discuss that family have by the heritage. Sometimes the siblings have a conflict with the heritage that parents working for them but parents did not have control of that.
One of the lines that stands out for me is, “Mama: Do you believe in your culture? You abandoned us for ten years and now you are coming to strip us from the only thing that represent the authentic history of my family, your family, and our culture.” These lines represent the confidence that Mama have about the heritage because she clarify the importance and responsibility about their culture to her two daughters.
Your short story “ Dee and the Quilts,” helps me to understand some issues that some people have about heritage.
Thanks for your short story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I hope you post interesting texts like this one.
I am curious about your dialogue, “Dee and the Quilts” because it changes my perspective about Dee. I can see that there is a conflict between the three of them and I would like to learn more about it.
One line that stands out for me is, “Mama: Do you believe in your culture? You abandoned us for ten years and now you are coming to strip us from the only thing that represent the authentic history of my family, your family, and our culture” I think this line is interesting because Mama is being kind about Dee even thought she abandoned them Mama is welcome to her. I think Mama words are little controversial I can feel that she is angry but at the time she upset and sad about what Dee wants to take away.
Your dialogue helps me to understand that life does not always work for people. Also that there are people which will not be enough what you do or give to them.
Thanks for your dialogue. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I will like to see more about your conversation and how it ends.
I literally read what I should read in the real story Everyday Use. Your imagination show the real conflict that Mama and her daughters had about the quilt. Each one of them had her claimed of what is the best for the quilt. You did great job, isn’t easy to predict the whole argument between the family, but you did very well.
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