Changing everyday,Very scary, andit’s getting destroyed.Weather I’m alive,Or maybe I won’t, It will hurt us. Weshould try and fix this,Flooding or drying,our future will lerk.Full of cash, why wontthey help us
I liked how you brought real world problems into your poem. It really made a deeper understanding of the struggles in the situation. You talked about the weather changing and all of the destruction that is happening which can make people think deeper into the poems theme.
I remember playing after school with the neighborhood kids until it was dark or until their parents called them in for dinner.I remember my grandfather fixing my bike tire every time I got a flat.I remember my
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We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It's easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other's work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it's been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
If being part of such a community makes sense to you, we invite you to join us. We welcome all youth and any teacher interested in having students publish online and participate in the give and take of a social network like Youth Voices.