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Genesis commented on the post, Along Manhattan Avenue
Dear Mbathio:
I am inspired by your poem, “ Along Manhattan Avenue ” because I like how you were able to take your poem that you chose in part 1 and make your poem so realistic and heartfelt.One set of lines that stood out for me is, “above the yelling and screaming/above the locked doors and heavy breathing/ above the beatings and blood…Read More
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Dear Genesis
I am thankful for this poem. I enjoys because it is unique and funny which is rare in most poems. One line that stands out to me is “I hope you have a place thats peaceful like mine once was”. This line shows how important this bathroom is to you. This poem reminds me that not all poems should be serious, and how some can even be funny.Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next.