• Frank wrote a new post, Boy 1 month ago

    For this assignment we had to mimic the short story “Girl” so that we can understand the reason why Jamaica Kincaid wrote her story that way.  Here is the link to the original version.                            

  • Dear Leaders of America,

     My name is Frank J Serrano. I am 17-years-old and I am currently a senior at Fremont High School in Oakland, CA. The things that have happened in Charlottesville, Virginia is terrible.

    • Dear Frank:
      I am very happy that you think like me and have some important facts post “How to make a better society,” because most people don’t really look at dose ideas or points. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “First off, there are a lot of racist people in the U.S. We’re never really safe because everyday we see caucasians killing African Americans even if they didn’t commit a crime and they end up being let go, but if it was the other way around African Americans would end up getting punished. It’s really unfair, how our system is pretty biased towards one race” I think this is correct because there has been lots of cases where african americans have been killed for just being in the wrong place at the wrong time. I also agree with all your ideas.

    • Dear Frank J Serrano
      I am happy about your post how to make a better society,” because people in society do have home or good jo
      bs that can’t take the kids to school and missing out on their education that will give them more jobs and thair stuff in the future.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: is when you take about the future of the people ” I think this is amazing because… lots of people need to know about what or how to make this society better for us and for future people.
      Another sentence that I saw was: about future nods This stood out for me because… I want to have a good Job and if the society not good I don’t think it lot more people would have Jobs now.
      Your post reminds me of something of a time when my dad told me to work hard and one Day eavrything will work out.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because… I enjoy what you wrote and and I think it would Chang the what people think

    • Dear Frank J Serrano
      I am happy about your post about “How To Make A Better Society” because it’s a really important situation that we need to change about the world as a community, I also love how you you had the courage to share about this situation but I think you should add more details or give more explanations because someone might not know what your really talking about i suggest that you talk/add like “What happened”? “What can we do to support our community”? and “why is this situation important to you and the community?” why does it matter?

    • Leo replied 4 weeks ago

      Dear Frank J Serrano
      I like how your talking that they should be a raise for people that cant evan pay bills or for food and also I like how you talk about that African-American people get badly punished or even shot/killed for there race and skin tone,One more thing that I like about your post is that you talk about our society and that it should be better in education for kids that want to go to school and also the housing for people not a lot of people have a good home and I agree with you.

      Thank you for writing,
      Leo

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