• Dear Penlop Gilighan,
    Indeed

  • Pretty kewl famgibroni

  • Flynn commented on the post, I am From 5 months, 1 week ago

    mad nutty broskif.

  • Open your eyes.

    Open your eyes and see the riots in France, the Mouvement des gilets jaunes, the tear gas burning the eyes of the French citizens, the police trying to blind the innocent people when we must

    • Dear, Flynn Baog
      My name is Christy and I am a 9th grader at life academy. I really like how your poem expands one’s thinking and talks about a serious topic on how these things need to be stopped or how they arent okay. Comparing how gas is is almost as free but water and food cost a lot, it shows the changes we need to make in our society and how messed up it is. Using anaphoras in your poem really brings out your poem and tells the readers what to open their eyes to even though they may not be there. Posting this out into the public can catch someones and give them ideas on how to stop these oppressive things from happening. When reading this poem I had a question for you.. What would you do to to somehow interrupt the oppression going in the society flow and thinking?
      Sincerely,
      Christy.V

    • I am inspired by your poem, “Open Your Eyes,” because is very deep and it really makes people think in what type of world we are living in. I totally agree that we should open our eyes and see the bigger picture. We should have a world that every country have something good to give to its people. We see America as the american dream but in reality if you live here you can see all the bad in it. I really appreciate that you made this powerful poem, it will surely open people’s eyes! Hope seeing more work from you! I’ll like to also know what you think our community or you can do to make a big change in our world?

    • So Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool and inspiring.

    • Nek minut

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