• Dear Sarah,
    I am very impressed by your post, “The Sweet Life of Sarah” because it reveals a very intimate aspect of your growth as a writer. I was also interested by your passion for writing and journalism expressed in your post.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “I feel that journalism has strengthened my ability to collaborate…[Read more]

  • My name is Murphy Fisher and I am a junior at JH Rose High School in Greenville, NC. I chose to be in journalism because I have always enjoyed writing and wanted to pursue it through taking journalism.

    • Dear Murphy Fisher :

      I am thrilled about your post , “Who Am I?,” because it allowed me to connect with you on certain points.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Journalism offers such a wide variety of skills that I believe it will be beneficial in any career I choose.” I think this is a good statement because I completely agree with you.

      Another sentence that caught my attention was: “As a writer, I have always wanted to pursue topics more to my interest.” This stood out for me because as a writer, I to enjoy pursuing topics of my interest.

      Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. As a writer, I was able to grow in my interests and focus on what I wanted and enjoyed writing for.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because…

    • Dear Murphy :

      I am very pleased by your post, “Who am I?,” because it really explained why you started to want to be a journalist. I also stated what steps you took to get where you are now.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Communication is very important, it is one of my strengths.” I think this is good because I also think that in journalism all of the sections need to have good communication to keep the paper flowing.

      Another sentence that I liked was that you focus more on human interest when you are writing a story. This stood out for me because most sports editors and writers would focus mainly on the facts of an article rather than how it affects the people.

      Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I was alone by myself at a concert and the only way that my mom would let me go was if I communicated to her where I was the whole time so I was safe.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you really showed your views and perspective on how you write and what specifically you do differently than other in your same section.

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