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Fatema commented on the post, Dee's plan to become rich 1 week, 1 day ago
Dear Issaka,
I am amazed by your story “Dee story to become” the way you characterized Dee shows that she will do anything to get what she wants even if it meant taking advantage of other people wealth. You mentioned something really powerful in your story that it touched me and I think It something that need to be taking in consideration as a…[Read more] -
Fatema commented on the post, The Hardest Letter to Write 1 month, 1 week ago
Dear Abigail,
I am delighted by your story ” The Hardest Letter to Write” because your it is very heroically.
one line that stands out for me is, ”However I would like to visit you one day and maybe have a cup of tea and talk about our lives. I almost forgot to tell you that I have always admired you.” It shows how Maggie loves Dee despite…[Read more]
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Fatema commented on the post, Mom Obligation 1 month, 1 week ago
Dear Emely,
I am very inspired by your short story, “Mom Obligation ,” because this story show that how strong a women can be. in this story mom had to do lot of hard work to raise her two daughter. she didn’t think about herself. she want to make her two daughter happy and she took all the hard time to herself.
One line ,” I am a single Bla…[Read more]
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Fatema commented on the post, The hidden Struggle of my life. 1 month, 1 week ago
Dear Deniers,
I am delighted by your story ” The hidden Struggle of my life” because your it is very heroically.
one line that stands out for me is, ” It was a struggle but it was like a nift stabbed in the chest but the more pain you have you need to keep it to yourself because you’re alone in a desert without any help to get out.” It r…[Read more]
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Fatema wrote a new post, Mama and Maggie's struggles 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Once upon a time, a beautiful child was born. All of the family members were waiting for this moment for a very long time. After waiting for two=a=half hours, they all heard a child crying and finally the d
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Dear Fatema:
I am inspired by your short story because it is very powerful and phenomenal piece of writing.
One paragraph that stands out for me, “Zahra life was at risk. Almost half of the body got burned. Her bodywould be filled with scars. This is why she always feel sad about it. Because when she goes out of the house, people look at her in a different way.” I think these two lines are critical to your story’s overall feelings, because it is very sad!
Your short story reminds me of my friend that I have not seen for decades, is this even true?
Thanks for your letter. I look forward to seeing what you make next.
Bas Bas
Fatema,
You have a beautiful talent in writing, especially in the scope of drawing readers in. It is fascinating to watch someone be able to tell a story that did not happen in reality with such great details.
One line that stood out to me was ” They were hugging each other and sharing happiness. Mom was holding the baby with teary eyes, and thinking what a blissful gift she had received from God.” With just a few simple sentences, you have succeed to portray the emotions of a mom who had just given birth.
Your short story inspires me to write more and more importantly, express my gratitude for my mother because moms are the best.
Thank you for your story. I look forward to reading your next one.
Dear Fatema,
I am stimulated by your short story ” Mama and Maggie’s struggles” because it is a great story which has a very specific details about the event that Maggie had faced which never makes her feel confident and make a good communication with outside of people. Her fantasy to be becomes a successful could makes change of her fear that she have inside of her.
One sentence that stands out for me, “ Suddenly, they heard a crackling sound and inside the house it was all black smoke. Mum was looking back to the house horrified. She can only see the fire is up to the sky and so dark” this scene is horrible but it is foreshadowing of your story. We can infer what would be the next chapter about.
Your story helps me to comprehend “ Everyday use” that I once read, where Maggie’s some of body part got burned because of the flame of fire and mama we’re happy to have two daughter.
Thanks for your story. I am looking forward to seeing what you make next.
Hey Fatema:
I loved your story and I think it’s truly inspirational. You can really feel the emotion you put behind the story. As I read it it kind of felt like a story that could have happened in real life. So my question is, where did your inspiration come from?
Thanks!
Josh