• Dear Jenifer,

    This is very difficult for the people who live it because in the Five feet apart movie the girl and the boy as they could not be together was very trite and they finally had to separate because they operated on her and he did not know the Boy left for another part.

  • Dear Samantha,
    I am essaidi with your post, Tell me the true, because there are people in the world who don’t know if they like women or men and that is very important to the world.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me “ Ivy is a girl who wrote things in her notebook and didn’t let anyone read them, once she drew her and another girl…[Read more]

  • So far, the plot in Bajo la misma estrella reminds me of the world. The plot reminds me of this because in my book Hazel and Gus they were playing not to be caught by enemies or people who are bad and the

    • Dear Evelyn:

      I’m surprised by your post, “Bad People,” because it is very true that there are many people in the world who are bad. I think many people have enemies. It is very sad to see that people are bad with other people.

      One phrase you wrote that stands out to me is: “In the world, if there are people who are very bad because whenever something happens is not good, then it comes out in the news and then they put schools to harm people who are innocent.” I think this is very sad because I am also in a school and I do not want to go through that something bad happens just for the bad people. There are many bad people in this world and they don’t care about other people.

      Thanks for writing I hope to see what you write next, because it is very interesting to know what can change just because the bad people. I think the less enemies you can have, the better. Do you have enemies?

  • Evelyn commented on the post, EL BULLYING 2 weeks, 5 days ago

    Dear Deysi,

    I am excellent with your post, El Bullying, because this is important to the world.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “Bullying” I think this is Desde entonces los demás compañeros dejaron de molestarlo. Lo que me parece similar es que en “La Ladrona de Libros” sucede lo mismo de que los compañeros la molestaban…[Read more]

  • So far, the idea central in bajo la misma estrella reminds me of another text. In Five feet apart, the similar thing in my book and in five feet apart is that there is a boy and a girl and they are bad but in a

    • Dear Evelyn:

      I am a little excited by your post, “Bajo la misma estrella”, because I can’t even imagine how exciting it is. It also makes me interesting as there are two people who love each other but cannot be close.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “There is a boy and a girl and they are bad, but in a way they love each other and cannot be very close”. I think this is interesting because it’s strange that two people who love each other can’t be together because they get sick.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I would like to know what this love you are feeling ends. I would like to know what this love you are feeling ends.

    • Dear Jenifer,

      This is very difficult for the people who live it because in the Five feet apart movie the girl and the boy as they could not be together was very trite and they finally had to separate because they operated on her and he did not know the Boy left for another part.

  • Evelyn commented on the post, Always friends 1 month ago

    Dear Samantha,

    I am impressed with your post, Always friends, because you talk about the boy and his dad and the boy did not know that his father was kidnapped by his two friends of the boy.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “They have friends and their father kidnapped two of their friends because he wanted the blood of a y…[Read more]

  • My favorite thing about Hazel that is she is sincere and she don’t give up.

  • So far, the plot in Bajo la misma estrella reminds me of the world. The plot reminds me of this because in the world there are many children who have cancer and do not give up and move on with their disease and

    • Hi Evelyn,
      My daughter read this book and she really liked it. I know that Hazel is a very special character. What is your favorite thing about Hazel?

      Ms. Navarro

    • My favorite thing about Hazel that is she is sincere and she don’t give up.

  • Evelyn commented on the post, Fears overcome 1 month, 1 week ago

    Dear Samantha:

    I am impressed with your post, Fears overcome, because you say that they were a demon that could impersonate his sister and the child if he thought he was his sister but that it seemed he was dying.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “when he entered I look at his sister in a white dress and bleeding as if she were d…[Read more]

  • So far, the plot in Bajo la misma estrella reminds me of the world. The plot reminds me of this because that in the world there are many people who have cancer and do not get down because of their illness and the

    • Dear Evelyn:

      I am excited by your post, “Don’t give up,” because this topic is so important. This topic is the most important because the people with cancer they don’t give up.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ Many people who have cancer and do not get down.” I think this is important because the people they don’t give up. The people need to lose the fear of cancer.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because these topics are so important for me. I hope and keep writing about important topics.

      Samantha M.

    • Dear Evelyn,

      Cancer has always been an important topic for me due to my cousin passing from cancer about two years ago. I have never heard of this book before but I think I might have to look into it. I really love how you talk about staying strong and not giving up. This was always really important to my cousin during his treatment. He always kept his head up and looked for the best in life even when hard times were taking over. Up until his last day he was a huge joker and enjoyed making us all laugh and encouraged us to not be sad about his death but keep our heads up and move forward.

    • Dear Evelyn:

      I am surprised by your post, “Don’t give up,” because this is important for the society. This topic is the most important thing because a lot of people in the world have cancer.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “the girl has cancer and she never reads things that are related to that and continues forward with her illness. ” I think this is important because the people need to achieve their selfs by don’t give up.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because this is a very important thing for to know what will happen in your book.

  • Dear Samantha:
    I am surprised with your post, About the world today, because You are saying about the people who are brothers and I think they cannot have a relationship because I do not believe that this is good for parents and also means that they have no respect in the family.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “in the world t…[Read more]

  • Dear veronica:
    I am impressed by your post “ Fuera la mala persona” because you see about the people come be are toxic and how people don’t value friendship. you describe the people that nothing think about them.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “Raina me recuerda esto porque en algún punto de la vida llegan personas que no t…[Read more]

  • So far, the plot in La chica del abrigo azul reminds me of the world. The plot reminds me of this because there are a lot of people they go crazy because they are left alone and they have no one to talk to and

    • Estimada Evelin:

      Estoy ilusionado con su publicación”volviéndose locos” porque es un tema real en el cual las personas pueden caer y nunca volver a levantarse.

      una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es : “The plot reminds me of this because there are a lot of people they go crazy because they are left alone and they have no one to talk to and they look like they feel very lonely and sometimes they look at other people and confuse” .

      gracias por su escritura . Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación , porque es un tema dell que todos queremos conocer para no caer ante el.

    • Dear Evelyn:

      Thank you for your publication “Going crazy” because it reminds me of many people who feel lonely and often have many problems that they can not solve and need to let off steam with a person who listens and understands them, because many people can not cope with their problems alone. Nobody can ever need a person who is available to listen to them.

      Thank you for your publication I hope to continue looking at what you write because it makes me very interesting.

  • Evelyn commented on the post, The hope 6 months, 2 weeks ago

    Dear: veronica

    I am sorprendida con tu post “The hope” because te expresas bien sobre tu libro.

    Una frase que usted escribió que es mi es The theme reminds me of this because in the book they passed a lot of bad things.

    Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribistes a continuación, porque dices que el los libros también pasan cosas…[Read more]

  • So far, the themes in El que diran reminds me of in the world. The themes reminds me of this because there is a lot of people in the world that discriminate because she does not have a house and they live with a

  • So far, the plot  in El que diran reminds me of the world. The plot reminds me of this because there are many young people who need their potatoes for everything because they need of his father’s this is similar

    • Estimada Evelyn:

      Estoy de asombrada por tu publicación “Mom on Protective” porque es verdad lo que dices todos tenemos a nuestros padres que siempre nos protegen y nos cuidan. Los padres a veces son muy sobreprotectores pero es por que nos quieren ver con bien y no sufriendo.

      Una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es: “ Are many young people who need their potatoes for everything because they need of his father’s” Creo que esto es cierto porque hay niños que no cuentan con sus dos padres y quisieran tenerlos pero por problemas familiares no los tienen.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque es muy interesante lo que lees y nos compartes muchas cosas que son ciertas y nos ayudan a pensar más.

  • So far, the idea central in El que diran reminds me of that there is a lot of guys in the world. The plot reminds me of this because there is a lot a guys that have a girlfriend or boyfriend because he has her

  • So far, the plot in Ni un dia mas reminds me of that many teenagers do when we live with our parents but no longer want to live with them and that happens in the whole world.The plot reminds me of this because

    • Dear Evelyn:

      I am so excited by your post, “La juventud” because you are talking about is happening very often. It is true that many young people do not want to live with their parents because they believe they are ready to live without them.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ Girl no longer wanted to live in her parents’ house because she wanted to do what she wanted and she decided to move to her brother’s house to do what she wanted.” I think this is sad because she is not ready and only wants to go to do what she wants. She needs to continue living with her parents so that she does not have a problem in her future.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forwards to seeing what you write next, because I like to see what you write and how you express yourself. I like the way you write everything because you get inspired.

      Samantha

  • Hasta ahora, el trama en y no se lo tragó la tierra me recuerda que hay muchas personas que no tiene donde vivir y tiene que vivir en la calle porque no son muy pobres o que han tenido dinero pero lo han perdido

    • Estimada Evelyn:
      Estoy asombrada por tu publicación, “La Verdadera Realidad” por que es verdad que hay personas que viven en la calle y no tienen un techo donde refugiarse andan en las calles de un lado al otro.

      Una frase que escribiste que se destaca para mi es :”hay muchas personas que no tiene donde vivir”. Creo que esto es muy cierto por que hay personas que viven en la calle y sus familias no las ayudan.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación por qué tus publicaciones son interesantes, si en alguna ocasión miramos a una persona necesitada hay que ayudarla con lo que sea, por ejemplo ropa, zapatos, dinero, comida, etc.

  • Hasta ahora, el trama en y no se lo tragó la tierra me recuerda que hay muchas personas que no tienen donde vivir y tienen que y tiene que vivir en la calle. La trama me recuerda esto porque hay muchas personas

    • Estimada Evelyn:

      Estoy muy asombrada por tu escritura me pareció muy interesante porque si hay muchas personas que no tienen donde vivir y es importante que muchas personas lo sepan para que ayuden, las pulgas son unos animalitos chiquitos pero no son peligrosos pero no debemos vivir en ellos. Estoy muy contenta por tu escritura espero y ver lo que escribes a continuación.

    • Dear Evelin:

      I am conmovida por lo que escribes sobre él libro de, “Y no se lo Tragó la Tierra” aunque no he leído este libro creo que es interesante.

      Una frase que escribiste que me dejo muy triste es en donde dices “hay muchas personas que no tienen donde vivir y tienen que vivir en la calle” es triste saber que hay personas que viven en esas condiciones y que hay personas que lo tienen todo y no lo valoran, pues como están acostumbrados a tenerlo todo no le dan tanto valor mientras que hay personas que con lo poco que tienen lo valoran y mucho.

      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación por que es interesante saber sobre lo que lees y me gusta en la manera en que los entiendes y los comparas con algo.

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