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  • Orange Cove, California, USA
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  • Evelyn posted a new activity comment

    Hi Dewry, the name of your book seems interesting to me. “The born a crime” I would like if you share more of that book.
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      hello jocelyn I think it is very good that you are reading a new book and it is good that you identify yourself in some scenes of the book
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        Hi people today i stayed in the part when anna is refugee with her family.

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        Hello Jocelyn, I find your book very interesting, uh, just like you would like to have a twin, the truth is that I would not like to have a twin because with my older sisters I fight, imagine having a brother of the same age, uff, I would not like.
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          Hello Jocelyn, I find your book very interesting, uh, just like you would like to have a twin, the truth is that I would not like to have a twin because with my older sisters I fight, imagine having a brother of the same age, uff, I would not like.
          • Evelyn posted in the group Book Club

            Hello everyone, today I will tell you a bit about my book, it is called Anna Frank’s diary, the truth, I love it, I really like how Anna writes the diary briefly, it is as if it were part of her, the part in which it most reminded me of something is because that with the lady who were in the hiding place, she told her parents that she was…Read More

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            Hello Estefani I am very happy that you are interested in other books. I think that the more we read, we clear our minds, congratulations.
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              Hello, good morning, today I was reading Ana Frank’s Book and the truth is that every time I read it I like it much more, a lot of drama ect happens. Ana talks a lot about her family and everything that is happening.

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              Hello everyone, my name is Evelyn, the book I am reading is ” the diary of a teenage girl ”by anne frank I really liked this book because it talks about how a family of Jews led a war since they were hiding from it Government to avoid murder is interesting because the diary was written by a girl of only 15 years.

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              Dear Andrea, your book caught my attention, I would like to know more about it, it is incredible how there can be so many homicides in places that are well known and visited by tourists, it reminds me of a movie that I looked at, it was the same, homicides, violence, etc. But what was different was that it was life on the border, well my…

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              Dear Mareli, so far your book reminds me of when there were several fights of people of color where I lived before, it is very interesting and very tragic what happens to some people when they do not know what they are getting into ” the problem ”. It seems that it is fine if that book did not catch your attention but I would like to ask…

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              So far, the Anne Frank theme reminds me of something that happened. In Anna Frank’s book she writes that they are at war and that they are looking for all Jews to kill them and since they did not want to die they were hiding from the government I think Anna Frank made that diary so they would know what they were willing to do in order to…

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              Hello, my name is Evelyn Rodríguez. My pronouns are She \ her. I live in Orange Cove California I am from Michoacan Mexico I lived all my life in Mexico until 9 months ago I arrived in the United States. I speak only Spanish but I am learning English the book I am reading now is The Diary of Anne Frank
                • Hi Evelyn! The Diary of Anne Frank is an amazing book. I think you will learn a lot after reading this.
                  • Hi Evelyn. The Diary of Anne Frank is a fascinating book. I love it. I like how Anne Frank describes her experiences of being a jewish during World War 2.
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                  • Estimada Cristina estoy asombrada de ver que le quitan los niños a sus familias y agradecida por que gracias a su post estamos sabiendo más sobre el tema se me hace muy injusto que los niños estén en jaulas como animales y también me imagino que su alimentación no es muy buena y tampoco su aseo personal.

                    Una frase que destaco en mi es ”Est…Read More

                  • Estimado jose,

                    Estoy admirada con su publicación ‘’La historia de mi vida’’ Por que la mayoria de mexicanos sueñan con venir a los estados unidos y trabajar para ser alguien en la vida.

                    Una frase que se destaca en mi es ‘’Cuando tenia 9 o 10 años’’ Por que en muy corta edad lo trajeron a vivir a los estados unidos sin el aprendizaje…Read More

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                    Hasta ahora,  el tema es como cruce la frontera para venirme a los estados unidos,  Recuerdo que el dia 7 de diciembre salimos de mi casa nos despedimos de mi papá y mi hermana la mayor.

                    Mi mama y mi he

                    La historia de el paso

                    Hasta ahora,  el tema es como cruce la frontera para venirme a los estados unidos,  Recuerdo que el dia 7 de diciembre salimos de mi casa nos despedimos de mi papá y mi hermana la mayor. Mi mama y mi...

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                    • Dear Evelyn,

                      I am impressed with your post, La historia de el paso, because It is very interesting of those that you wrote because I grab something similar where you where I pass you where I pass and the truth if it is very ugly that to be there until the good thing is that I was lucky because I was only there as 6 days.

                      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is Llego el dia donde nos cerraron el puente y ya no querían dar protección familiar entonces la gente se empezó a cruzar por el río para que así migración los agarrara a algunos les toco suerte dependiendo su caso los dejaban pasar. I think this is awesome because some even risk their life by passing here. But the only thing is that some people are lucky to pass by here because being there for days or months is very sad.

                      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to see what you write next, because it’s very interesting what you write.

                      Evelyn salinas,

                    • Dear Evelyn:
                      I am excited for your post, “La historia del paso,” because it’s a very interesting story. I think what you went through happens to many more people. It is a very good publication to share your story.

                      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “No había donde dormir dormíamos en la calle en casas de campanas y pasabamos frío algunas personas no tenían dinero para comer y entre la gente nos cooperavamos.” I think this is sad but at the same time something happy because It is sad to know that people slept on the streets in bell houses. And at the same time it is a happy thing because people support each other.

                      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I was very surprised by your publication. And I would like to know more about how you are right now. It is very interesting to know how people go through all that.

                      Samantha.

                    • Dear evelyn,
                      I am impressed by your post, La historia de el Paso, because it is a very interesting story. I think it is really sad because that happens to many people too.

                      One sentence you wrote that stands to “Mi proceso fue muy tardado porque aparte no había donde dormir dormíamos en la calle en casas de campanas y pasábamos frío algunas personas no tenían dinero para comer y entre la gente nos cooperamos.” It is really sad because a lot of people go through this situation all the time. Also because they want to have a better life for their family.

                      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because your post is
                      very interesting.

                    • Dear Evelyn,
                      I am intrigued by your post it’s very sad and i like where you mentioned that “algunas personas lo tienen todo y aun así se quejan…” This is very heart touching post because your family got separated and you had to leave everything behind to begin a new better life. And yes some people have it all but don’t treasure it and use it well, for example students who have the best education don’t take it seriously and the ones who don’t are the ones who wish to have a life like theirs and be learning in a huge school that provides everything for their students.
                      Thank you Evelyn for sharing your post. I look forward to seeing what you write in the near future.

                      Sincerely Rosa

                  • I think that in order to reduce violence in Mexico, it should by a good government to fight organized crime

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                    Hasta ahora, los personajes de el libro que estoy leyendo, llamado Ana Frank,  me recuerda a algo que experimenté cuando vivia en Mexico.

                    Lo similar es que había guerras al igual que en el libro.  Las per

                    El peligro en mexico

                    Hasta ahora, los personajes de el libro que estoy leyendo, llamado Ana Frank,  me recuerda a algo que experimenté cuando vivia en Mexico. Lo similar es que había guerras al igual que en el libro.  Las personas se ocultan...

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                    • Evelyn,
                      It makes me so sad that your community has to deal with this violence. What do you think it will take to reduce the violence in Mexico?

                      Ms. Navarro

                    • Estimada Evelyn,

                      Estoy asombrada por tu post, porque aprendí de tu cultura que nunca había escuchado.

                      Una frase que escribiste que se destacó en para mi es “ Las personas se ocultan para evitar que les llegará una bala a ellos o a su familia”. A Veces a sí pasan cosas en muchos lugares del mundo. Muchas personas se esconden con su familia para estar protegidos del peligro.

                      Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación, porque quiero aprender mas sobre tu cultura.

                      Por qué crees que a veces en el mundo hay mucho peligro?

                    • Evelyn
                      Estoy de acuerdo con el tema del peligro de México, pero quiero decirte que no solo en méxico se vive la violencia también hay violencia en todo el mundo. y es algo que yo pienso que nunca va a terminar.

                    • Estimada evelyn,
                      yo tambien se lo feo que se siente en esa situación porque en mi rancho también se quiere meter un cartel organizado y eso no es fácil porque a ellos no les importa matar a cualquier persona ellos solo quieren mandar.

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