In school the classes can be very difficult. we can have a hard time with math, english, sciences, so many other subjects but sometimes the things that help us get through school and all the hard ships is sports. A way for us to distress or get our mind of so many things not only school.

Dear Evelyn,

I am interested in your post, “My beautiful neighborhood,” because…

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I am a park in Bensonhurst, Brooklyn. I have a nice look with the plants, trees and I look good when people walk around me.” I think this is very nice because your sentence are very good.

Dear Evelyn :
I am so excited with your post, “your beautiful neighbourhood” because i never went there before.I never go to park even in my neighborhood.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I have a nice look with the plants, trees” I think this is good because some park from New York has no trees so people can’t get fresh air.
Another sentence that I like is ‘I like to go out of my neighborhood because there is not much noise and I can sit down and read a book without anyone bothering me’.“ This stood out for me because there is no park in my neighborhood and if i want to go park and read,i can’t.And there are some kids in my up stairs.They make noise.
Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time i want to study for exam but the kids are so noisy and i can’t study.So i just sit and do nothing.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because i am interested in what you write.