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  • I like what I write and I agree because I have also learned something that I like to do as a soccer player I want to learn to write and speak English well.

    • In school the classes can be very difficult. we can have a hard time with math, english, sciences, so many other subjects but sometimes the things that help us get through school and all the hard ships is sports. A way for us to distress or get our mind of so many things not only school.

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    Park

    I am a park in Bensonhurst, Brooklyn. I have a nice look with the plants, trees and I look good when people walk around me. The people or childrens can use me when they want to play. My people make me look

    Evelyn's My Beautiful Neighborhood Gravesend

    Park I am a park in Bensonhurst, Brooklyn. I have a nice look with the plants, trees and I look good when people walk around me. The people or childrens can use me when they want to play. My people...

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    • Dear Evelyn,

      I am interested in your post, “My beautiful neighborhood,” because…

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I am a park in Bensonhurst, Brooklyn. I have a nice look with the plants, trees and I look good when people walk around me.” I think this is very nice because your sentence are very good.

    • Dear Evelyn :
      I am so excited with your post, “your beautiful neighbourhood” because i never went there before.I never go to park even in my neighborhood.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I have a nice look with the plants, trees” I think this is good because some park from New York has no trees so people can’t get fresh air.
      Another sentence that I like is ‘I like to go out of my neighborhood because there is not much noise and I can sit down and read a book without anyone bothering me’.“ This stood out for me because there is no park in my neighborhood and if i want to go park and read,i can’t.And there are some kids in my up stairs.They make noise.
      Your post reminds me of something that happened to me. One time i want to study for exam but the kids are so noisy and i can’t study.So i just sit and do nothing.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because i am interested in what you write.

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    Dear: Rahul’s

    I liked what you wrote on your post Climate Change. I am interested in this because my subject also deals with the environment also because it likes to know about nature and I agree about what to write to you. “This can be detrimental for both humans and animals in the environment because it can cause sea levels to rise, contribute…Read More

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             How do plants help humans?

     

    This question is interesting for me because I like to talk about nature and I would like to know more about my question.

    I want to know that if people wan

    The Plants are Life

               How do plants help humans?   This question is interesting for me because I like to talk about nature and I would like to know more about my question. I want to know that if people want more plants and...

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