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  • Oakland, California, USA
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    This Project was about creating/ trying to make a change in the community with an issue that is most common. So we try to spread the word within the school and the community. The way we did it is by informing

    Reflection: Child Obesity

    This Project was about creating/ trying to make a change in the community with an issue that is most common. So we try to spread the word within the school and the community. The way we did it is...

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    Why faction over blood? Imagine living in a world where the community is divided into five factions or sections. The factions are Dauntless (the brave),Amity (the kind), Erudite (the intelligent), Abnegation

    Changing Divergent

    Why faction over blood? Imagine living in a world where the community is divided into five factions or sections. The factions are Dauntless (the brave),Amity (the kind), Erudite (the intelligent), Abnegation (the selfless), and Candor (the honest). It is...

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    • I really liked how you guys made the slides, they were both informative and also entertaining. My one question, is that could there be another way to get people to accept divergence other than by violence? You wrote you wanted people to, “accept people who are Divergent and not kill them”, but isn’t it contradictory because you have to kill people in order to achieve that? I really liked this post though because i remember reading the whole divergent series and wondering how it would be if it was real and this post made me think more about that.

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    “My fellow Americans, we are and always will be a nation of immigrants. We were strangers once, too.”~ Barack Obama. As Obama stated everyone has migrated or at least had someone in their family that did. Imm

    The path of Immigration

    “My fellow Americans, we are and always will be a nation of immigrants. We were strangers once, too.”~ Barack Obama. As Obama stated everyone has migrated or at least had someone in their family that did. Immigration is a...

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    • Dear, Evelin
      You did an unbelievable job at writing this. I love how you introduced the interviewee because you added good important information, this helps me add more information over my interviewees next time. I think you could’ve added more analysis about the quotes you chose. But I do believe your quotes were great and brought the reader’s attention. Another thing you did great was your conclusion it really told the reader the message of your article. Overall, I love your article and the way you formatted it but I think you could’ve added more analysis which would make it a lot stronger. Great Job! Sincerely, martha.

      • Thank you so much for reading my blog Martha! I’m glad you took my article as a tool to help you next time. I’ll take your comment to help me right more better analysis next time around!

    • I like how you started the blog with a Barack Obama quote since he was the most impactful president in my opinion. Something you should do is when you are citing in your context to not write .com since it’s misleading. Also, check your spelling since it was confusing to know what words you meant to say. I hope to see more work about immigration.
      -Valerie

      • Thank you for reading my blog. Also thank for catching my typos, I’ll focus more on my grammar when I write again. I also agree that Barack Obama is a impactful president!

    • Dear Evelin,
      First of all I love how you talked about a strong and really important topic in our city, State, and overall country. Something else I really like is how you format your article (by topics). When you use Obama’s quote, “My fellow Americans, we are and always will be a nation of immigrants. We were strangers once, too.” This quote was really relatable to me because we are all from different places world but we all live in a big country together. Something else that was really strong to me was when you talk about how people are leaving their country to have a better life and or to save their family. And when thinking about people leaving their country cause there in danger why would we deny them shelter especially if we have nothing against them they are just trying to save their family. Overall I love the topic you chose and I hope it raises awareness to others around us. I also suggest you to use grammarly because you had a few typos.
      -Christina

      • Thanks for reading my blog. I really hope to raise awareness, hope you could too! Thanks for noticing my typos, that’ll make me a better writer!

    • Dear Evelin, I am amazed by your essay, “The path of immigration” because many people dont really understand the whole situation with immigartion. Also the reason why many mexicans and others come into the US. One sentece that stands out to me is, “ This interviewee asked to stay anonymous and explained, “ I moved here because my family was very poor and I had a hard time finding a job.” I think this is a very strong sentence that supports the huge reason why many immigrants come to help out their family that they leave behind during rough times. Thanks for writing.I look forward to seeing whta you write next, because I feel like there could be other ways in supporting your claim. Also I will look forward in what other intresting facts you will have to tell us. Sincerely Jackie.

      • Thank you so much for reading my blog! The part that stood out to me was when you talk about the interviewee that mention about moving to the USA to find a job and better support the person’s family. A question I have for you is, what ways you think my claim can be supported by? Hope you can join and speak up for the immigrant community! Look forward to hearing back.

    • Dear Tristian,
      Thanks so much for reading my blog! Also I appreciate your compliment about my topic. I really like the quote you mention from our 28th president of the United States. I’ll like to know more your opinion about immigration. Do you know anyone that is an immigrant or was an immigrant? Do you think there’s a way to solve the problem towards immigration, for example instead of sending them back from what they ran away from what you think we should do?
      Hope hearing back from you!

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    Hi my name is Evelin Espinoza, this poem is about escaping from violence. Overall is people escaping the corruption of Mexico and moving to the USA. 

    BOOM!!!

    Blood running down around the streets,

    Rivers, R

    Escape from Violence

    Hi my name is Evelin Espinoza, this poem is about escaping from violence. Overall is people escaping the corruption of Mexico and moving to the USA.  BOOM!!! Blood running down around the streets, Rivers, Rivers , Rivers Blood like Rivers, People running away, Screams...

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    • Dear Evelin,
      I liked how you used words in Spanish to express fear. With that fear it shapes your whole poem. I also like how you make nice how you used questions in your poem to make it clear people that people are confused. This also shows me that there are multiple personalities in fear. Overall your poem is moving and i hope you keep writing.
      Christina : )

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    This shadow box represents my counter narratives which are my point of view of my own world, also my dominant narrative which is the point of view of society. When the people look at me, they see that I am

    Evelin's Shadow box

    This shadow box represents my counter narratives which are my point of view of my own world, also my dominant narrative which is the point of view of society. When the people look at me, they see that I...

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    • Thank you for sharing Evelin. I completely agree with the idea that there are many false stereotypes that are running rampant in today’s political climate. I wonder what you have planned for your future, and how you plan to achieve your goals?

      • I’m glad you like my shadow box,Branigan ! I have a lot planned for my future, the biggest one is becoming a Nurse.
        Thanks

    • Dear Evelin,
      your box was very well detailed with pictures of yourself when you were younger and pictures with your family. I also loved how you used the mexican flag to show your pride of your country it is really moving because of all the drama that is going on you still care about your home even though you are here. I also liked how you put quotes in about being short because that is something that’s not holding you back but is making you stronger. Keep believing in yourself
      From, Christina

    • Your box looks very creative and has lots of information attached to just the items. Stereotypes are something that I feel most minorities have felt in the United States and it is something that we need to work on. I like how you talked about being on the honor roll and how it defies the stereotypes against you. There are a lot of things that might try blocking you, but you can do whatever your heart desires.

    • Hi Evelin, my name is Summer I am junior about to be a senior at San Jose State University. I really love how your shadow box catches my attention. It very beautiful, creative, and informative. I too am a fellow Latina. I really like how you described your culture, from the language to the region you are from. There will always be someone who will try and put you down or say certain things about ones culture that are not true, like President Donald Trump. I like that you mentioned him because you are a perfect example of the opposite of what he says we are. You are brilliant and hardworking and a strong Latina.I can see that from the information you have said. I wish you nothing but the best in your future and to always push through stereotypes that people may have of you. Great work!

      Summer Thompson

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Reflection: Child Obesity

Changing Divergent

The path of Immigration

Escape from Violence

Evelin’s Shadow box

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