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    This Project was about creating/ trying to make a change in the community with an issue that is most common. So we try to spread the word within the school and the community. The way we did it is by informing

    Reflection: Child Obesity

    This Project was about creating/ trying to make a change in the community with an issue that is most common. So we try to spread the word within the school and the community. The way we did it is...

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    I am inspired by your poem, “Open Your Eyes,” because is very deep and it really makes people think in what type of world we are living in. I totally agree that we should open our eyes and see the bigger picture. We should have a world that every country have something good to give to its people. We see America as the american dream but in rea…Read More

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    Why faction over blood? Imagine living in a world where the community is divided into five factions or sections. The factions are Dauntless (the brave),Amity (the kind), Erudite (the intelligent), Abnegation

    Changing Divergent

    Why faction over blood? Imagine living in a world where the community is divided into five factions or sections. The factions are Dauntless (the brave),Amity (the kind), Erudite (the intelligent), Abnegation (the selfless), and Candor (the honest). It is...

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    • I really liked how you guys made the slides, they were both informative and also entertaining. My one question, is that could there be another way to get people to accept divergence other than by violence? You wrote you wanted people to, “accept people who are Divergent and not kill them”, but isn’t it contradictory because you have to kill people in order to achieve that? I really liked this post though because i remember reading the whole divergent series and wondering how it would be if it was real and this post made me think more about that.

  • Dear Tristian,
    Thanks so much for reading my blog! Also I appreciate your compliment about my topic. I really like the quote you mention from our 28th president of the United States. I’ll like to know more your opinion about immigration. Do you know anyone that is an immigrant or was an immigrant? Do you think there’s a way to solve the pro…Read More

  • Thanks for reading my blog. I really hope to raise awareness, hope you could too! Thanks for noticing my typos, that’ll make me a better writer!

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