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    I was not born in the United States. When my mother told me that I was going to come here and be with my family I was super excited. I have gone six months without seeing them and it was truly killing me from the

    Memoir Piece- Esthefany Frazier

    I was not born in the United States. When my mother told me that I was going to come here and be with my family I was super excited. I have gone six months without seeing them and it...

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    • Hey Fany,

      I really liked your piece because I feel like its something you don’t really share about yourself. But, I also know that it is a big part of who you are and your identity. I like that you focus so much on your family but, this also has to do with where you identify. I wish you would have talked more about the difference of you living here and when you go back over there. I know its important for you, as well as myself that’s why I found your peice so touching because even if I was born here I feel at home in Mexico and for you it might be similar.

      Thank you for sharing this.

      Love,
      Chata

    • Dear Esthefany,
      I really like how you’re really about your family like everyone else should be. I also like how you showed graphic weight on one of your panels as well. Everyone has different traditions and Im glad you shared yours to us so we can know how you celebrate. Good Job!

    • Hey Esthefany,

      I was really entertained by your comic because of how you expressed the importance of family. This stood out to me because I can relate to it and the way our families celebrate and spend time together is similar. I also noticed that my family does the grape thing too where youre supposed to have 12 wished. I liked the vibe on your back page. The graphic weight is very obivous and it just feels like it would be such a good time hang out and start the year with your family who you love.

      Love,
      Stephanie

    • Hey Esthefany,
      I like how you write about one tradition you have and enjoy with your family. I have some too, but sometimes I feel we are slowly loosing them, I hope you hold onto yours. Family and the traditions we do, are important and what makes them unique and fun. they bring joy and everyone together which is cool. Family is everything.

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    I am wild as hell

    I like letting go

    Being stress free

    I dislike uptight people

    I hate being uptight

     

    I am wild because school restricts me

    From being who I am

    From who I️ want to be

    Why I'm___ As Hell

    I am wild as hell I like letting go Being stress free I dislike uptight people I hate being uptight   I am wild because school restricts me From being who I am From who I️ want to be I like escaping that environment I...

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    • Hi Esthefany,
      I really liked that this piece describes who you really are. I also believe that being wild is good and I’m glad you know you are wild because you feel like its fun. Also I liked that you do not let school and all the stress stop you from being you. Good job, I think its well written.

    • Dear Esthefany
      I am impressed with your work which is really amazing. A line that stood out to me was “No time to be locked down with morals you do not believe in.” I think this was a cool line because many people do or don’t do things because they are locked down like you said in things they don’t believe in but still follow it. I think it’s cool that you don’t follow morals that you don’t believe in, you follow what makes you happy and that’s amazing because not many people can do that.

    • Dear Esthefany
      You really described yourself on this poem and I know because I’ve known you for a while already. I like the way you wrote this with good details and good organization. Good Job

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    Esthefany Frazier

    Last Revised: 02/6/2018

    English 4- 3rd Period

    Oliver

     

    I am Esthefany Navil Frazier Marte. Emphasis on the Marte. The word ‘Marte’ means Mars in spanish. We are the strongest fami

    Reflecting on My Name

    Esthefany Frazier Last Revised: 02/6/2018 English 4- 3rd Period Oliver   I am Esthefany Navil Frazier Marte. Emphasis on the Marte. The word ‘Marte’ means Mars in spanish. We are the strongest family in Bandera. The town Bandera is like a slow, very...

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    • Dear Esthefany,

      Something that stood out to me was how your family are the strongest when you guys are together. My favorite line from your memoir was when you explained how the pride in your family name was huge its good to know you guys have a really strong bond as a family.

    • Hi Fany,
      I really liked your piece because of how proud you are of where you came from. I can tell you love your family. I also liked that you are able to say who you are and not afraid of saying your loud, loving, etc. I love your piece!

    • Dear Estephany,
      I really like your post “ Reflecting on My Name” I like the words that you have added, makes it sound more strong and have good similes. One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “ We are fighters. We have each other’s back. Our family before anything and anyone. The the name I carry defines who I am and I would not want to change on bit of it. I like to embrace it and show it off. The name makes me stand out. I am loud, dramatic a fighter, I Love , And I laugh. I am who I am because I was raised around those omnipotent people. They taught me to respect and value. So, I can later show the generations after me to respect and value the family name”. I like this quote because you talk about your family of how family is first than anything and that’s true also how you like your name and wouldn’t change it thats really nice. There’s a lot of connections between your family and mines; how our families are loud, all together, respect, dramatic, fighters,etc. I enjoyed reading your post, it was so good you have a nice name! Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.

    • something that I liked about this post is that is that you went into detail with your name. You said what it means and how you talked about you family. Something that you can change is about the teenager attitudes. other than that this is a really good report and I Liked it.

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