The three stories have similarities on wanting to educate the reader in some way or another, particularly because all these stories talk about education while having similar ideas, but view throughout different
I am very thoughtful about your story “Contradictions that make a beautiful piece of writing” because sometimes is optimal to also look at the other side of the page without judgments and you were conscious about how each one was supposed to act n their shoes.
One of the set of lines that I felt very attracted towards,was ” The Lesson” we have Moore who is helping the children to get to know the different classes in the society and in the “Everyday use” Mama is there for Dee to get the education and support that it really was not there for Maggie at all what shows the favoritism that it could exist in a family with a lot of disparities between the siblings.” , I am surprised about it gives to also show about how also Dee could be as a good defended of her side when she left the house. She actually cared a lot about heritage. Yet she could probably wanted to get away from poverty without mattering anything. She did not care about her family i some way. In fact, it uses a lot of Irony to show it.
Another set of lines that stand out for me is the lines of the second paragraph, which states ” can illustrate this is in this story Mama is more concern about Dee’s education than what she cares about her other daughter Maggie who was just staying home”. You actually mention something that should also have another controversy. It can also use the literary element or Irony and characterization. Even when the mother was caring about Maggie., Dee was also taking care of herself benefit. It is hard to see it from a fair side though.
In fact, this reminds me of some people who actually leave their family and the people who they love just because they want to have a better quality of life in another place that fits best for them. It also happens a lot with immigrants. They leave their families to come to potential full of opportunities country where their life can get better regardless of how much they want to be with their family or love their family.
Thank you for sharing your story with me. I look forward to hearing more about them.
I am amorous by your writing and post “Contradictions that make a beautiful piece of writing” because it described absolutely phenomenal ways of how these three stories have acted based on their social background and race. Life situation and position did really matter. I really like the way you highlight the personality of each character of each story. Everyday uses how Maggie’s lack of self-esteem makes her be alone and get omitted from the society. In addition, education is really significant to be known in society. Otherwise, we will be recognized as unknown to others.
I am really fascinated by your amazing writing. This writing helps me to understand “ Everyday use, The Lesson and How to date Brown girls “ how race and characteristic traits impact life.
Thanks for your writing. I am looking forward to seeing what you make next
I am very engaged to your story “The hidden Struggle of my life”, because of the choice that you made to describe a story like “ Everyday Use” that is already complicated but putting your point of view makes it such as understandable piece of writing that is analyzed in the best way to make it as clear as you could be able to put…[Read more]
I am very attracted to you story “Maggie’s hard life”, because of the choice that you made to describe a story like “ Everyday Use” that is already complicated but putting your point of view makes it such as understandable piece of writing that is analyzed in the best way to make it as clear as you could be able to put not just deta…[Read more]
I am very surprised with you story “Mom Obligation” , because of the choice that you made to describe a story like “ Everyday Use” that is already complicated but putting your point of view makes it such as understandable piece of writing that is analyzed in the best way to make it as clear as you could be able to put not just details…[Read more]
I am proof of your letter about your story, “My True Feelings” because I like the way you showed Dee voice as a writer to express through her letter to say what she wants from her family. And this is a situation of many families that has some problems they can just figure out the solution by writing a letter. One line that stands out for me is,“I am writing this letter to you at this very moment, because I just feel like is time to speak my truth and address the issues between us.” I think this line is striking because it makes me to pay attention and understand more about how someone can get the courage to say what he desires even though sometimes it is not as easy as he thinks. Another line that stands out for me is, “it gave me strength and tools to make myself stronger and I thank her for all the times that she tried to make me feel that I was less than you.” I think this line is compelling because it shows that Dee recognizes that Maggie can be better that her sometimes and she thanks her mother showed her that. Your Story helps me to understand a story that I once read on “everyday use” because in this story it was an issue of a family that one sister was burned and others one not . Then the burn sister can not handle her situation . She found that her situation was unfair. But when I read you story I think is very different that this story. Thanks for your letter I look forward to seeing what you make next. I would like to see different type of story from you. Then try to include some strategies elements that we can feel it more.
I am impressed by your letter “My true feelings,” because I noticed two lines in your letter which I think they are impresif.
One line that stands out for me is, “However, what really made me this way was the discourage that I was getting from you as my sister you never step up and stand to defend me from our mother reckless behavior towards me. ” I think that this line interesting because you think that even though her mother wasn’t paying any attention to her, as a sister, De should have spoken up for her so that she would feel loved.
Another line that stands out for me is, “since then I feel like that not only we lost everything in the fire, but also we might have lost our love as a family” I think reveals the source of the because you mentioned that the fire could have burned their love along.
Your letter “My true feelings,” helps me understand the story “Everyday Use” that I once read because form the story the relationship between Maggie and De after the house was burned wasn’t any better. Your edition of the story tells how their relationship was not getting better.
Thanks for your letter “My true feelings”. Your writer is pretty impressive and so I am looking forward to seeing what you make next.
I am so sensitive about your letter, “My True Feelings” because not a lot of people are honest when it comes to how they feel about certain things. In this letter you showed how a true talks about when they see unfairness happens. Maggie wanted to have the truth all out, to start a new beginning with her sister. I am truly stimulated with the method you used to describe how Maggie wanted to have a peaceful family. This part caught my attention “Even at some point our mom was such as a strong supporter of the descriptiveness idea that I was nothing compared to you. At some point she was so sure that I was literally nothing that she made me believe that I really was just a simple piece of a human being, while you just got all her love and admiration something that I never had from her”, because Maggie showed her sister that she does not feel comfortable with Mama being ashamed of her, but she still ready to forget about everything and move on to the next step. Your letter reminds me, before I came to the United States I used to live with one of my aunts. We did not have a good relationship, the righteous part was when she called and asked me to forgive her and let everything behind us I did the same too because I wanted to have a new start with peace. I am so grateful That I got to read your letter and I can’t wait to read what you will write next.
I am fascinated by your Letter, “My True Feeling,” because I really like how you used Maggie’s point of view to explain how she feel about Dee and all the reproached she had. How she think her sister did not love her. One set of lines that stands out for me is, “Today, I still reflect on the idea that I am maybe not enough to be loved.” I think this line is interesting because his really connected to his tittle how he want to used Maggies to expressed her feeling. Another line that stands out for me is, “Even at some point our mom was such as a strong supporter of the descriptiveness idea that I was nothing compared to you” I think this line is thought-provoking because I think Maggie don’t believed herself after she was burned. Therefore this made Maggie lost confident on her. Additionally Their mom have part of responsibility in the this situation because she could supported her daughter and helped to go to college as her sister Dee. Your Letter reminds me of childhood that I was burned on my legs. I did not remember the whole scene because I was little but I remember the pain and the people whom where screaming around me. Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I would like to see you writing about Dee’s point of view. I’m really curious how you interpreted that.
I am choked by, your letter, “My true feelings>,” because a lot of children in this world thing that their mothers or their families don’t love them, but they are wrong.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “At some point, she was so sure that I was literally nothing that she made me believe that I really was just a simple piece of a human being, while you just got all her love and admiration something that I never had from her.” I think this is impossible because whoever you are your mother will be the first person to give everything she has for her children’s happiness.
Another sentence that I attracted my attention was: “I feel like that not only we lost everything in the fire, but also we might have lost our love as a family having to deal with the heart-wrenching notion that I was just not good enough to be treated like you was by our mother.” This stood out for me because a family is where anybody can go and have support. It doesn’t matter who is in your family. Family is not a synonym love but in reality, it is.
Have you seen this article? https://www.betterhelp.com/advice/love/family-love-what-it-is-what-it-looks-like-and-how-to-make-it-happen/. I thought you might be interested in this because it gives detail about love and family.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next.
I am intrigued by your letter “My true feeling ” because it explains the difficulties that Maggie had to face due to the lack of support she received from her mother. I also admire your elaboration of the distinctive behavior that mama had toward Maggie.
One line that stands out for me is “Mama put you ahead of me and made me feel like I was really nothing just like I was not capable of reaching to the gold pedestal that she had you on” because it asserts how Mama had a strong negative attitude toward her.It also explains why Maggie doesn’t have a strong personality like her sister . Maggie always received negative attitude from her family whose supposed to be there for her and also being person of color in the 80s was not welcoming.
I would like you to elaborate in that line “because more than just be taken down by the negative it gave me strength and tools to make myself stronger and I thank her for all the times that she tried to make me feel that I was less than you but what she did not know was that she was just making me better than what you was through her eyes in some way or another.” How do you think that Maggie is building her life? Is there a specific line in the story that implies that Maggie is building her life. From my understanding of the story Maggie seems to be a submissive person who does not like change and she like to have conventional life like her family.
I enjoyed the time reading you letter and i look forward to read more of your work.
Great job I literally felt like Maggie who wrote these words. There is so much emotion in the sentences you wrote almost in each word I read, moves my heart emotionally. The most words that hurt my feelings was when Maggie said ” Today, I still reflect on the idea that I am maybe not enough to be loved.” These fifteen words were strong enough to take me away thinking about the millions of people who are suffering in different part on the world. They may feel the same thing, especially the kids who have no reason to take there rights away from them. They are thinking why we’re suffering and not being loves by getting some help, since the environment around us is mist up by the war. Finally I want to congrats you Eros that you wrote really great sentences.
I am adsorbed by your letter, “My true feelings” because many parents reject their children and don’t support then in the obstacles of their lives. Many childs has to face their obstacles alone because they don’t a have a family how supports it. One set of lines that stands out for me is, “Even though we never had the closest relationship as you now know and after our house burned down to ashes and that accident happened with my hands it had not been the same, since then I feel like that not only we lost everything in the fire, but also we might have lost our love as a family having to deal with the heart wrenching notion that I was just not good enough to be treated like you was by our mother.” This lines makes me reflect because of how deep and changing was that moment for Maggie’s family. Not only loosing their house, they lose something important to keep a family together which is love. Another set of lines that stands out for me is, “Although, at some point I wanted to be in your shoes, I feel that at the end of the day our mother did give me something in life that is going to make me fulfill and reach all the potential that I have and that thing was resistance to all the negativity around me, because more than just be taken down by the negative it gave me strength and tools to make myself stronger and I thank her for all the times that she tried to make me feel that I was less than you but what she did not know was that she was just making me better than what you was through her eyes in some way or another.” This makes me also reflect because many parents make their childs feels that their births was a mistake in their lives. Make then feel like they are nothing but what this types of “parents” don’t know is that they are teaching then. Making their childs strong and persistend with all the negativity around then as you said. Your short stories show us a different maggie from the maggie of Everyday Use. A maggie that took all the negativity around her and made that as her strength. Thanks for your letter “My true feelings”, looking forward to see what you make next.
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