Julia, I like how you introduced your blog post with a practical example that catches the reader’s attention. I agree with your point that ride share services have several problems that users often do not consider before getting into a stranger’s vehicle. You used strong evidence from a variety...

Paige, I like how you introduced this blog post with a strong sentence to get the readers attention. I agree with your point that many people are unaware of the persecution that is taking place towards Christians around the world. You use strong evidence and a variety of sources to...

Claire, I like how you introduced your previous blog post and connected it to this one. I agree with your point that with the coronavirus pandemic there is a lack of empathy and understanding that people are looking for now more than ever. You used strong evidence from a...

Mary, I agree with your point that people often neglect the effects that social media and technology can have on our communication skills. You used strong evidence to support your argument and examples to help the reader understand. I also like that you identified a specific example of how...

Maggie, I agree with your point that the way we express empathy is continuously evolving as society adjusts to new problems such as coronavirus. I also like that you identified a specific way how people are adapting and expressing empathy through technology. The example of technology being used in...

I liked how you formatted your essay with a whole paragraph dedicated to asking the questions no one wants to acknowledge. It really gave me a better understanding of the topic as a whole. Additionally, I liked how you included a quote from a document to help support your...