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When is there gonna be change in our society? Don’t we all wonder that at some point of our life. In the poem changes by Tupac Shakur, it demonstrates with a message that calls for justice. With impressive v
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My first impression of this poem was that it was eye opening, and inspiring. Everything the poem “Changes” says was facts.It makes me feel Grateful, yet, at the same time, frustrated . A line that espec
Read MoreMy first impression of this poem was that it was eye opening, and inspiring. Everything the poem “Changes” says was facts.It makes me feel Grateful, yet, at the same time, frustrated . A line that especially evokes the...
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When is there gonna be change in our society? In the poem changes by Tupac Shakur, it demonstrates with a message that calls for justice. With impressive verses and great rhythm, the song represents various
Read MoreWhen is there gonna be change in our society? In the poem changes by Tupac Shakur, it demonstrates with a message that calls for justice. With impressive verses and great rhythm, the song represents various challenges and injustices that...
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Emily commented on the post, Pictures of Mexico
Dear Wendy:
I am so touched by your story about the places you love, “Pictures of Mexico” because you just shared what are the parts of Mexico that means the most to you and how it has taught you and helped you so far in your life. Also how you talk about your culture and Represent how you are Mexico in some type of way.
One part of your sto…Read More
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J Hood Wright Park is a place where little kids go to scream at the top of their lungs just to play tag. It’s a place where they beg their parent to buy them ice cream right in the corner to get a sugar r
Read MoreJ Hood Wright Park is a place where little kids go to scream at the top of their lungs just to play tag. It’s a place where they beg their parent to buy them ice cream right in the...
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I really like this picture essay. As someone who does not live in an area where there are a lot of bridges, if any, I have always found bridges to be cool and interesting. I think that the few sentences at the end are impactful. However, I think that if a little more background information was given to this park and the shooting that occurred, this essay could become even more beautiful. I appreciate you going and finding all these pictures from different angles. It gives the park life and depth.