I am surprised and admired by your essay responding to Ocasio-Cortez, “Stand Up Generation” because it encourages young people to take actions and fight for our human rights no matter the circumstances. Keep in mind that nothing is going to change if we don’t do anything about that.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for m…[Read more]
I am feeling very happy by your letter “The Future Started Yesterday,” because the title makes me think that our future started at the ready . We have to take more consideration of what we are doing right now because of the impact on the environment. I support both videos. These teenagers are a pretty good example of activism who…[Read more]
In our English class we decided to read three short stories. The first one is “Everyday Use” by the author “Alice Walker”. The short story is told in first person by “Mama”, an African-American woman living
I really like your writing, since your title is your ‘hook’ that took my attention. The fact that education is the world’s key made your writing most likely to take people’s attention. I strongly agree with every single word you wrote in your essay. The way you figure out the writing strategy shows that you read the three stories very well. Isn’t easy to figure out the same writing strategies for three different stories, but you did it. After I read your essay, the three stories become one story with the same writing strategies. Your writing has the ability to persuade people and change their beliefs. Thanks Emely, I will be happy to read more of your essays, poems, and stories.
Hi Emely, These books sound really interesting! I like how you tied the messages of all three novels together, even if they are all told through a unique lens. It is really important that we take note of all the people who are currently writing to get the attention of people around the world to show them these critical messages. I think you would love to read the novel “Educated” by Tara Westover, or “I am Malala” by Malala Yousafzai as they also deal with the importance of education in the world today. -erica s.
Dear Emely Lopez: I am fascinated about your short story, “Education Is The Key to The World,” because it shows us how we can use literary elements to describe a story. It is really impressive to show how identifyings those elements can help the readers to understand better what the stories are about. One line that stands out for me is, “Each story has a central point, that education is so essential because it is the only way people can defend themselves in today’s society . ” I think beguiling this line is because it is really important to know where education can take people. I can say that without education mankind will never be able to be where they are right now. Every new thing we can see and use today is because of education and now man can use that research to develop their intelligence. So education is not just being intelligent but it is teaching people what is the of having an education and being educated. Another line that stands out for me is, “In conclusion I believe that the authors are turning sandpoint to make them real and invaluable moments so the society can notice that history keeps repeating over and over.” I think this line is fascinating because everything has a role to play, that’s why things are repeating over and over. To make the world a better place we have to work it face to face. Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I can’t wait to read more of your incredible talent. I love the way you use literary elements to expand your ideas.
Hi Emely! I thought that you did a fantastic job tying all of the books messages into one. Its really fascinating how complex each book is and how you were able to create a whole new perspective on their views. I think that your message is really important and that you have a cool way of explaining it.
I am envious of your essay, “Education Is The Key To The World,” because it shows a realistic point of view about life and how education plays its role in people’s life.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “that education is so essential because it is the only way people can defend themselves in today’s society. ” I think this is eye-catching because it shows that life is not about how much you have, but it’s about how you take advantage of the resources around you. Another sentence that I liked was: “The tone is pretty unfair though all the stories in one of more ways the reader would get that inequality are the main idea.” This stood out for me because it proves that it’s ok to not be satisfied with your current situation, but it’s not ok to be in the same place for the rest of your life.
Have you seen this book? I thought you might be interested in this because it tells you how to actually read a book.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I think the realism in your literature is so eye-catching and opens the reader’s mind.
I love the way that she let us know how she feels about education in just a tittle, I actually like the picture that you pick it shows a lot about your personality and how important is for you being educated
I am so interested, fascinated and surprised about your writing “ The Brightness of Education,” because the topic is so true and your writing has so much to say about education. I pretty much support the idea that acknowledging change our mind makes people be independent and productive to our life. One sentence you wrote tha…[Read more]
I am overjoyed by your post “Discovery Of My Felt Sense” because you appreciate the way women want to overcome inequality at that time. I like the way you emphasize who was the first woman running to power. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “We shall fight injustice or even racism without going to war or even…[Read more]
I am touched and inspired by your writing skills. The short poem called “ In a rare writing way, I predict a part of the story’s future.” let us thinking about what would happen after the end of the real story. Would Dee able to respond her Mom like that, you made me think about what is pretty interesting you let the reader wonde…[Read more]
I am feeling surprise after having read your create and unusual explanation about your story called “ What is a friend?” which made me think that maybe the main characters from “Everyday Use” are going to meet a new person but I am confused about the topic how they connect with each other.
I am feeling melancholy after having read your interpretation “The Differences Between Sisters.” It because in the story mom was trying to help other back family when this horrible experiences happens to Maggie, is unfair for sure but this is the cruel reality took place many years ago. That’s the way how back community suffe…[Read more]
I am a single Black women who raised my two daughters by hard work as a man on the field all day, breaking ice to get water for washing doing the best so Maggie and Dee can be proud of me. I wish to be
I am astonished by your short story, “Mom Obligation” because it reinforces the cruel environment of living as an African American at this time. It also shows the power of education and how it could change minds.
One set of lines that stands out for me is, “I only had the opportunity to be a slave who has sold like an object without any value. I got up early every single day to work in the cotton fields with the sun rays burning my skin.” I think these lines are very thoughtful because it shows that the mother knows the true power of education despite the fact that she wasn’t able to get an education because she didn’t have a choice.
Another paragraph that stands out for me is, “After all, I am going to be proud I believe that one day both of you are going to be a change for the country creating equality.” I think this section is> intense because it shows that the mother really believes and depends on her daughters to change the world that she wasn’t able to change by herself.
Your story helps me to understand “Everyday Use” that I once read. It talks about a girl called Maggie who feels she is better than her sister because she is highly educated. I think that we don’t get equal chances in life, so we can’t say that someone is better than others.
Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Your way of writing is very emotional and realistic. I hope to see you writing more stories that are history-related and non-fiction.
Dear Emely I appreciate you that you focus in Mama struggles in her life, You did a great job, most of us were focusing in Maggie and her sister, while the main character who faced a lot of issues wad the Mama. You just change our opinion about Mama, while we were thinking that she wasn’t fair with treating her daughters. However now we know by your writing that Mama had very difficult life where she had to being fair in the position that being fair is not the most important. Mama was trying always to be fair but she always had other things to do in order to gain the satisfaction of her daughters in a difficult stage of life. Thanks again Emely you did great.
Dear Emely: I am very surprised with you story “Mom Obligation” , because of the choice that you made to describe a story like “ Everyday Use” that is already complicated but putting your point of view makes it such as understandable piece of writing that is analyzed in the best way to make it as clear as you could be able to put not just details of the story but to proof a piece of yourself as a writer in to an already established and developed almost a new story with the sense of the importance of family involvement. One of the most impacted pieces stated on your story that stands out to me is when you said, “One of the most traumatic situations occurred to Maggie. Sometimes I can still hear the flames and feel Maggie’s arms sticking to me, her hair smoking and her dress falling off her in little black papery flakes”. I think this line resemble how you got into the character’s shoes,because the way that you are able to describe what is happening to the character in a deeper way than what we could read shows a lot of emotions and connections to the story as a whole this creates a sense of satisfaction in the reader when a writer is able to make the deep of a description, imagination,and tone . Another quote that stands out for me is “She wants to travel around the world representing her race as a high heritage without knowing or appreciating the origin of her race how black people struggle in order to have the education that she is having right now.” I think this expresses the desire of the main character of proving the doubters wrong while fighting for her dreams because she has been to the struggle and now she wants to stand out to show the best version of herself. Your story help me to understand the original version in a deeper way because of the imagination and tone that almost open the bridge for me to transfer inside of the story and see what is happening with the character like if i was an additional character of “ Everyday Use”. Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. What would bring me back to read any of your story is the appreciation to the detail and the attachment to keeping the main pieces of the original version without banishing the purpose or lesson of the actual story.
I am very inspired by your short story, “Mom Obligation ,” because this story show that how strong a women can be. in this story mom had to do lot of hard work to raise her two daughter. she didn’t think about herself. she want to make her two daughter happy and she took all the hard time to herself.
One line ,” I am a single Black women who raised my two daughters by hard work as a man on the field all day, breaking ice to get water for washing doing the best so Maggie and Dee can be proud of me,” that stands out for me because this shows that the women can do anything. and hard life make us learn lot of thing and make us strong.
Your story helps me to understand, “Everyday use” story more clearly and mama’s personality and what she did for her daughter.
Thanks for your story ” Everyday use” I look forward to seeing what you make next.
I am very astonished by your story “Mom’s Obligation”. I really like your story because you get to show the piety from the Mother, the sacrifices that she did in order to race their children and the time that she dedicates in order to race them , and the way behind of how you describe every single moment happening in the family.
Furthermore, one of the reasons why I like this story attracts me is because of how you eventually put yourself in the side of Maggie and Dee and describe each in their ways of being throughout the story. It eventually describes the sacrifices of the Mother. Moreover, another things that has attracted me and made me become attracted by your story is how put Maggie as the main focus of the story. The Mother is really congratulating Maggie for having understood her and besides mother was understood by Maggie and Maggie was understood by the mother as well. You letter inspires me because it can show that at the end they both understand to each other and it is what matters the most. Finally, the story of Mom’s obligation makes me feel very inspired and attracted because of how you put the Mother as the confessor of the behavior of her two daughters. I look forward to hearing more of your stories and share it with you and on to other people because they are very thoughtful. I hope you have a very good rest of the weekend.
Dear Emely, you show a lot of feeling and really express your struggles and you show how determined you are to your kids. I have no idea what its like to be a mother so i cant speak on the idea of you raising 2 kids and being a single mother. so many good things will come to maggies way because shes being given so many good examples by you. – Cory Escobar
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