• Great comparative essay, you did well to present both sides of the argument. By putting the opposing arguments first you develop a strong opinion without putting your own biases in it. How much do you think minimum wage should be increased to? Maybe look at this website to show more of the downsides and advantages of raising the minimum wage.…[Read more]

  • The first article was called, Lax Immigration Policies Invite Terrorism, Mark Krikorian states that America has lax immigration policies that allow terrorists as well as illegal aliens to easily take up residence

    • Hi Elliot,

      I agree that the Baltimore Sun article is more reasonable than the other. I have seen how Trump is using rhetoric to get eyes off of him. I believe more immigrants need to be let in and Trump is using fake news to not get that to happen.


  • Hi Olivia, I think journalism is a key concept in this country. Good journalists are the difference between an educated and uneducated population. And if people are educated we can elect better people to lead us into the future of this country and the world. I am not sure about your coma conspiracy theory but I think if that really was the case…[Read more]

  • Well put. How you introduced new evidence flowed very well with the piece. It is very true that the US is putting too waste millions of pounds of food and healthcare supplies. But I think you need to take away the “other” part of your writing. When you say third world countries it makes it nonspecific and removed. To really create change I think…[Read more]

  • Tuition rates in the past statistically will increase at about twice the general inflation rate. The rate of tuition inflation rate between 1958 and 2001 ranged between 6% and 9%. Which ranged from about 1.2 to

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