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  • Dear: Nayelin

    I am Surprised about your post “Here, There Everywhere” because are you asking “what would have happened if I had never come to the US?”

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “The reasons why I would have stayed in my native country for my family and because I was more accustomed to the environment” i think this is like…Read More

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    I think that people feel insecure in their countries because of the problems they have on the part of the police. There are countries where the police are also corrupt and do not feel so safe, so they sometimes

    Why do people feel insecure in their country?

    I think that people feel insecure in their countries because of the problems they have on the part of the police. There are countries where the police are also corrupt and do not feel so safe, so they sometimes...

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  • Dear Oswaldo:

    I am Surprised by your poem “learn more about who I am and where I from because you have good ideas for writing a poem.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “ I am from a big family were we have a fun time,EVERYTIME” I think this is interesting because you have a good relationship with your family and you can see that…Read More

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    I am from Guerrero,México between Puebla,Mexico city  and Oaxaca.
    I am from Macario(Father),leonarda(Mother), Gustavo(Brother), Esmeralda(Sister), Elvis(Brother), and Kael(Brother).
    I am from Dia de Muertos, a

    You want to know about me?

    I am from Guerrero,México between Puebla,Mexico city  and Oaxaca. I am from Macario(Father),leonarda(Mother), Gustavo(Brother), Esmeralda(Sister), Elvis(Brother), and Kael(Brother). I am from Dia de Muertos, and Christmas. I am from a hardworking family. I am from Mexican foods like Tamales, Tostadas de tinga, Tacos....

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    • Dear Eliezer :
      I am proud with your poem, “You want to know about me?,” because you explained of where you from. Also you showed about how u have a hard working family.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I am from a hard working family.” I think this is important because than you could be an example your parents by you in the future become a hard working person.
      Another sentence that I liked was: “I am from Mexican foods like Tamales, Tostadas de tinga, Tacos. I am from pizza.” This stood for me because food is what u have to eat everyday.
      Your poem reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I went to mexico I ate tamales and tacos and they good.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you next, because I liked how u described everything about you.

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