I like how concise you are with your emotional connection towards books and/or reading in general. There are a few grammatical errors but overall clear; I would recommend some diversity in syntax. Furthermore, I would love to dive into the difference of opinions on reading and its positives as...

I completely agree especially with your specified wording with your thesis “ prolonged involvement in the Middle East caused senseless death and pain that no longer promoted the success of the mission”. It is also respectfully stated. Not all the blame lies on one group or another but rather...