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  • Dear Saoronn:
    I am interested your by poem, “Truth about about America” because we should be able to find unity and peace between everyone. We should also try putting our differences aside and focus on the good things..
    One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you describe what the rallys were doing to each other and how the KKK had…Read More

  • Dear Jai:
    I am interested your by poem and photograph, “My Favorite Places, People and Things” because Iive in New York and we don’t really see things like that in the picture. I also think it’s interesting how you described the garden.
    One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you describe the rose and how you add “love” into it too…Read More

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    Dear Anais :
    I am interested by your poem “Dancing my next step” because… you describe a big turning point in your life which is really interesting.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ At that point I knew I had to change for the better because I didn’t want to be stuck anymore. Also wanted to take the next step of my life.” I…Read More

  • Dear Abigail:
    I am fascinated by the way you described your emotion, your poem, “Everything You Can and Cannot See,” because you managed to show different emotions through experiences. You used different locations which all described different emotion such as the word use of “pain” and “light” but are yet still are where you’re from.
    One li…Read More

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    Eden commented on the post, Where I'm From

    Dear Mariam,
    I am fascinated by how you managed to speak on where you’re from in your poem, “Where I’m from,” because You manage to describe what you have been through and the description of your neighborhood without actually letting people know where you’re from.
    One line that stands out for me is, “ Where mafias and gangueros paint the p…Read More

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