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Durran wrote a new post
Adults,
Have you ever wondered what happens when a young kid gets injured while playing youth sports? Kids can be injured while playing youth sports and if not addressed it can be very harmful for that kid
Read MoreAdults, Have you ever wondered what happens when a young kid gets injured while playing youth sports? Kids can be injured while playing youth sports and if not addressed it can be very harmful for that kid and this matters...
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Durran commented on the post, Mistreated
Thankyou so much for reading my blog. A question i have for you based on your comment is, Why did my liine happen to stand out to you and is there anything that i can do to make my writing as an author better for any of my readers so i can seem more intresting. -
Durran commented on the post, Skateboarding in the bay area
Dear manuel. ithink that your post was pretty decent. A line that stood out to me is” In many public places in Oakland and the Bay Area, people screw metal rods in cement blocks where people sit on to prevent them from riding on top of them, but Oakland doesn’t do much or spend money on skateparks. That’s why people skate around the city bec…Read More
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Durran wrote a new post
There has been an overwhelming amount of cities that have to deal with police brutality in the U.S., But to be honest, The writer believe’s that 1 of the most controversial cities that incorporates police b
Read MoreThere has been an overwhelming amount of cities that have to deal with police brutality in the U.S., But to be honest, The writer believe’s that 1 of the most controversial cities that incorporates police brutality is Oakland. Did...
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Thankyou so much for reading my blog. A question i have for you based on your comment is, Why did my liine happen to stand out to you and is there anything that i can do to make my writing as an author better for any of my readers so i can seem more intresting.
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Dear Durran, I think your post was interesting to others and me because it included the police brutality going on in Oakland. This one of the most important actions going on in Oakland because it has been occurring a lot and people has been trying to find ways to stop this. A line that stood out to me was ” Oakland has a long history of police brutality in their communities. And even in the early years of police brutality it was still awful and could have gotten better” because even if it’s not an OK action police in our community do, it’s still going on. Thank you for writing and keep it up…