• Daisy‘s profile was updated 2 years, 11 months ago

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    Dear President:

    Hello my name is Daisy Ramirez, I live in Anaheim California ,a college student who currently works at two jobs ;a fast food company, and for a car company. Well let me just let you know why I

    • Dear Daisy Ramirez
      I am amazed by your post “Minimum wage needs improvement” because I like how you gave a good detail on how why you need the minimum wage to improve. I also like when you said people come to America for a better life. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ” The American Dream is according to Google definition, “the ideal that every citizen should have an equal opportunity to achieve success and prosperity through hard work, determination, and initiative.” I think this is a great sentence because you searched up what does it mean to have an American dream. Another sentence that I liked was “Which in fact is the reason why most immigrants come to the US in the first place, for a better life and more opportunities” because i agree on that immigrants come to Us to have a better life. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because you gave a good story on raising Minimum wages.

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