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    Hey Oscar — thanks for taking your time to comment unlike many other people who feel like not reading my tingz. Much respect. Anyways, I appreciate this comment and you acknowledge the part that has a story behind it ! Thank you very much :).

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      • dear adrian ,
        you blog was really interesting to read. the picture of the dog caught my attention and made me feel so many emotions. i like how you included a chart to show the homelessness rates and all that. i just have one question for you : what made you choose this topic ?
        good job !

      • Stereotypes In Oakland

         

        It’s not even about us as humans anymore. It’s mostly about us being portrayed as the villians of this community we call home. This home of ours, Oakland, is having trouble stan

      • Dear Edwin ,
        Your poem was really cool. It showed the truth and made me notice the pain people that go through poverty go through. I can tell how much effort yu put into this poem which made me think that you’re great writer ! You did great and I liked the poem :). I got 2 questions for you.
        Does this topic get to you or make you feel some t…[Read more]

      • Doraneli commented on the post, Why Me? 3 months, 2 weeks ago

        YES SISTER

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        I wrote this poem about a recent lover I had who has broken my heart completely. I wrote how they kept us away from each other and how no matter how many times we showed our love , our family didn’t except.

        • Dear Doraneli,

          I thought your poem was great and I love the way you connected Romeo and Juliet to your own personal life. I really like how you included the beginning of Romeo and Juliet in your poem to show your story. I think the part that stood out to me the most is, ¨ Can you hear us? Do you feel it? Have you seen us? Have you lived it?” I think that this part is really good in your poem and really making the reader question about what the poemś image is. The outline of the poem is great and overall it was amazing. Thank you for sharing your poem!

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