• For my monologue project, I selected lines from a monologue that shows Macbeth at his most vulnerable from Shakespeare’s play,”Macbeth” I chose to learn Act 5, Scene 5, lines 20-31 as my monologue because it sh

    • i admire how in detail you got, and how you showed a very good understanding of this scene, and Macbeth overall as a character. i also wrote about how Macbeth is obsessed with death, and having power, overall i completely agree with everything you said.

    • Dear Donald:

      I like your tone and your pacing because the way you speak says that the character is feeling sad. Macbeth is speaking as if he gave up at night. I admire the way that you described your scene. I like the way that you present Macbeth. One sentence that stands out to me was if it was up to me to stage this scene, I would most likely make the actors playing Macbeth pace back and forth in a castle in order to set the mood of Lady Macbeth “In the scene where this monologue occurs, Macbeth is quite a gloomy character. This is especially true after he kills duncan”. I like the way you described Macbeth.

  • Dear Milo,

    I loved how in depth your monologue analysis was, especially the lineI might choose to stage him in the bathroom where he is looking at himself in the mirror, because i think that would be perfect for this scene.

    I can’t wait to see more of your work.

  • Dear Max,

    I am amazed by your performance of this monologue, because of the accuracy that it portrays, i had never realized how much so most female characters are associated with magic, like you mentioned with the witches. I think that the same claim can be made for lady Macbeth, she definitely has those moments of being seemingly connected with…[Read more]

  • Dear jackson:
    I am impressed by your story “the end of the semester”, because you were able to paint a very vivid picture of your experience.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Ms.Williams heels cracking on the floor” I think this is beautiful writing because it shows very good attention to detail.
    Another sentence that I loved w…[Read more]

  • you painted such a vivid picture i think many of us around the world can relate to. great work!.

  • Donald commented on the post, Kai's Life 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    i appreciate your passage because it shows how one decision whether made by you or a parent can change your life in a seemingly minute way but in reality be big.

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