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Dominick M commented on the post, Kyle
Dear Isiah,
I am intrigued by your poem because it does seem like a lot of work to take care of a sibling. But later on it gets easy because you will have him and he will have you.
One thing I learned from your writing that stood out for me is: “Isiah, you’re going to be a big brother.” I think this is interesting, because becoming a big broth…Read More -
Dominick M wrote a new post
Read MoreI was born in a neighborhood called Park Slope, but when I was nine years old I moved to a new neighborhood south of there called Sunset Park. The neighborhood has a large park also called Sunset Park, that...
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I think that it’s really important to have a place, like Sunset Park, where you feel at peace. With our lives being so hectic and constantly moving, I’m sure Sunset Park feels as though the world is paused and you have a chance to breathe and have fun!
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Dominick M commented on the post, What age is best to move out of your parents house?
Name: Dominick
Dear Murad ,
I am satisfied with your introduction because it’s true people do move from their parents home and they start to make a life. I’m going to be scared to move out of my parents home because who knows what life has planned for me.
One thing I learned from your writing that stood out for me is: “ I think moving out of my…Read More -
Dominick M commented on the post, Learning to Find My Own Way
It’s nice that you have you family that supports you and I hope your a type person that’s not afraid to put herself out there.
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Dominick M commented on the post, Learning to Find My Own Way
Thank you I appreciate the comment it was touching how you had the same feeling about family you look up to lets you down.
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Dear Dominick
I am interested when you explained about Sunset Park also when you described it because i live in Sunset Park too.
One thing I learned from your writing that stood out for me is: It is a beautiful place to go to in my experience ” I think this is interesting because it is a quiet place and there are a lot of places to go to.
Your writing connects to my own experience. For me it’s a calm place to be in. There are a lot of stores and a lot of houses.
Thanks for your work on Youth Voices. I look forward to seeing what you write next because it is interesting to learn about different places.