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Gun violence
The project that I was working on was my upstander project. This project was about how can we bring awareness on a topic. My topic was gun violence in schools. Being an upstander to me it means to
Read MoreGun violence The project that I was working on was my upstander project. This project was about how can we bring awareness on a topic. My topic was gun violence in schools. Being an upstander to me it means to...
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Dear Ibad:
I am happy about your poem, “get up” because it talks about saving the society. It tells us to make the world better and to not trash it like we are doing.To me the main message of your poem is to keep the society safe. I know this because in your poem you say that we are destroying the environment..One line that stands out for me is,…Read More -
Diego commented on the post, The Effect Of Violence On Youth, Oakland California
Dear christy,
Congratulation you have decided to comment on this vlog. One thing i liked about your comment is how you appreciated my math skills. I really liked how you addressed that I did a good job. I would ask questions if I had some but this vlog is more irelevant than other blogs about rape or human trafficking or something like…Read More
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Diego commented on the post, Challenge of Youth With Single Parents
Dear Joseph,
I find this blog to be amazing and very informative. I believe that this is one of the best blogs i have ever read in my life. I like how you interviewed people with personal experience to make this blog better. I also like how you gave reasons of how it can affect positively and negatively.keep up the great work.
Sincerely, your…Read More
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Diego commented on the post, Why are people Moving in and out?
Dear kassandra,
I really like your blog about why people are moving out of their home. I like how this blog is divided in 3 parts so that we have more info on this topic. I like your concluding paragraph and it makes me think more about this topic and it makes me think that there is more to be done. Great blog, keep it up.
Sincerly diego rivera.
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I don’t think that this is an issue that needs much direct education upon it. I think learning about the complexities of mental health and educating people about that is more valid than focusing on horrific actions taken by disturbed individuals. This is just a roundabout way of saying that you should think about your project as being a way to talk about mental health in its most extreme and how people can help to stop these atrocities from happening. I think that you did a good job on your project, but I think that you need to really think about how this comes off and how people need to be educated on the why, not the how people do these things.