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    To begin, the book Divergent does connect to 2017 because in the world of Divergent you need to belong in, what they call, a faction or else you’re just factionless for the rest of your life. Some of us can

    Connecting Divergent to our world.

    To begin, the book Divergent does connect to 2017 because in the world of Divergent you need to belong in, what they call, a faction or else you're just factionless for the rest of your life. Some of us...

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    Diana commented on the post, Domestic Violence

    Hey Neo,
    I appreciate you leaving a comment, it helps me know what I need to improve. Also I agree that I only show men as the abuser that was my mistake I truly believe that it can be either man or woman that can be the abuser, but also the articles I was getting my sources from only targeted men as the abuser so the articles is something I…Read More

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    When women or men suffer from domestic violence they usually don’t report it right away. One of the reasons why is because their attacker threatens to kill them and their family, so the woman or man has no c

    Domestic Violence

    When women or men suffer from domestic violence they usually don’t report it right away. One of the reasons why is because their attacker threatens to kill them and their family, so the woman or man has no choice...

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    • Hi Diana,

      I enjoyed reading your post on the topic domestic violence. I like how you include an image that would bring out emotional response in the readers. I also like how you include different interviews in the post as well. You included interviews from your mother and your neighbor as well. This brings in more information from different sources regarding the topic. It also give new perspective as well, such as the interview from your mother. It shows how domestic violence not only affects the people in the relationship but also the children as well.

      I like how you use the phrase “Domestic Violence is an issue everywhere in the world”. I think it’s important that this issue is known and recognized, so that more people are aware and can step up to help. Like you said in the beginning of your post, men or women suffering from domestic violence don’t usually report it right away. I like how you are bringing awareness to this issue and talks about signs of domestic violence in a relationship as well. Good job!

    • Hey Neo,
      I appreciate you leaving a comment, it helps me know what I need to improve. Also I agree that I only show men as the abuser that was my mistake I truly believe that it can be either man or woman that can be the abuser, but also the articles I was getting my sources from only targeted men as the abuser so the articles is something I disagree with. Again thank you for your wonderful comment and have a great day.
      -Diana

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    When women or men suffer from domestic violence they usually don’t report it right away. One of the reasons why is because their attacker threatens to kill them and their family, so the woman or man has no c

    When women or men suffer from domestic violence they usually don’t report it right away. One of the reasons why is because their attacker threatens to kill them and their family, so the woman or man has no choice...

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