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  • Deysi commented on the post, Impossible love

    Dear Samantha

    I am very moved with your publication “Impossible love”, because it is very sad to think that two people who love each other do not allow them to live it.

    A phrase that you wrote that moved me was “What reminds me ah that in the world there are people with terminal illnesses and who do not want to fall in love, because they do…Read More

  • Dear Yadira,

    Me emociono mucho tu post, “A Poem of Mexico Response” porque me recordo a mi querido El Salvador. Hace un año que lo deje pero, nunca he olvidado de donde soy y de lo orgullosa que me siento.

    Una frase que escribiste que se destaca para mi es “learned of how beauty behind Mexico, its unity in family and its love for peace…Read More

  • Dear maria,

    I liked much your post about “The Consequence that my mother is addicted?” because I know of many children who are in that situation, they walk the streets asking for money, there are even children who do not survive this problem with their parents.

    One sentence that caught my attention was “Many times their children do not have…Read More

  • Dear Jose:

    I am en duda with your post “La historia de mi vida” because no explicas cual fue la situación por la cual tu quisistes viajar a Estados Unidos.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “cuando todo se arreglo los fuimos a comprar boletos para los estados unidos” I think this is good because creo que vinistes buscando…Read More

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    Hasta ahora los personajes en “Anne Frank” me recuerda a mi país. La trama  me recuerda esto porque en mi país está relacionado con los pandilleros ellos no son personas de confiar y hacen el mal en mi país y

    Un Mundo Sin Paz

    Hasta ahora los personajes en “Anne Frank” me recuerda a mi país. La trama  me recuerda esto porque en mi país está relacionado con los pandilleros ellos no son personas de confiar y hacen el mal en mi país...

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    • Dear Deysi:

      I am impressed by your post, “A World Without Peace,” because it is impressive how the Jews lived to relate to what they are living in your country. I think it’s impressive how two countries that are far apart can be compared so much.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Gang members in my country hide themselves for doing evil and Anne Frank hide for not having peace in political parties and we still live in a world that has no peace.” I think this is awesome because sometimes people who do nothing wrong have to hide as if they did something wrong.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I like your comparisons you make with your life and that of other people. I would like you to continue telling about your country.

      Samantha.

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