Cool story, you should try using the word Jello with a personal connection to help better your story. It will help the story come together more. The use of words is not just to take up space, some of these words really do have deeper meanings.
This article is interesting to me, on the fact that you mentioned the origin of the word oobleck and how you described on how it fascinated you. I like how you described the science behind how oobleck works. When you mentioned on how you were on the deep end of YouTube, it made me remember on how i do that when im bored.
This is a youth-powered social network that was started in 2003 by a group of teachers from local sites of the National Writing Project.
We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It's easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other's work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it's been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
If being part of such a community makes sense to you, we invite you to join us. We welcome all youth and any teacher interested in having students publish online and participate in the give and take of a social network like Youth Voices.