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why dee trying to be African but has a weird handshake Print this page. Author Dawry

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so what she is trying to proof is that she is better than her sister Maggie and her Mother because I think that’s what a seens like. Print this page. Author Dawry

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why he been homeless for six years he dont have a family or a friend that can help him? Print this page. Author Dawry

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why did he say that he did break hearts into pieces overnight i broke them slowly and carefully. Print this page. Author Dawry

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they raised money to send her to augusta to school because she wanted to live her own life without her mother and maggie she wanted to become a actris. Print this page. Author Dawry

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i think what she is trying to say is that maggie is tired of living the poor live she wants more than that and she wants to become a Actris. Print this page. Author Dawry

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maggie arm burn because of the fire in the house Print this page. Author Dawry

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she is a hard working women that take care of her children. Print this page. Author Dawry

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so this guy johnny carson is like a jimmy fallon before jimmy fallon wow Print this page. Author Dawry

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why they not taking classes for then can become film stars because if they love tv shows take classes and learn. Print this page. Author Dawry

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this paragraph just describes the yard that maggie made so clean and wavy yesterday afternoon she said people feel comfortable because of the yard “it is not just a yard” is more likely like a extended living room. Print this page. Author Dawry

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i think this paragraph is describing what is happing in the yard. Print this page. Author Dawry

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Not a lot of people act this way

Roger, the protagonist in “Thank You M’am,” has a few traits that influence his relationships with others.  One, he is poor. Two, he is confused. Three, he is grateful. You can see how he is confused when Mrs Jones brings him into her apartment:  “He did not trust the woman not to trust him And he did not want to […]

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why she had a large purse with a hammer and nails inside Print this page. Author Dawry

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the boy thank the women and he never saw her again thank you Ma’m” Print this page. Author Dawry

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the said that he should not snatch your purse to buy some suede shoes said Mrs.Luella bates washingtom jones you could ask me. Print this page. Author Dawry

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she was trying to go home and cook something to eat and the boy try to snatch her purse. Print this page. Author Dawry

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roger ask Ms.Luella bates washington jones if she was going to take him to jail and she asnwer not with that face i would not take you nowhere the women said. Print this page. Author Dawry

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know we know that the boy name is roger and ms.Luella bates washington jones trying to help him Print this page. Author Dawry

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the boy stared sweating like crazy he was scare Print this page. Author Dawry

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the boy wanted to hit the dash but the women tell him that he is dirty and needs a face wash. Print this page. Author Dawry

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she is going to take the boy to her house to wash his face because he is dirty. Print this page. Author Dawry

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i agree with cristin because nobody should steal that is bad

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the women trying to tell the boy that is not good to steal from anyone. Print this page. Author Dawry

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Why the women turned around and kicked the boy in the square in his blue-jeaned sitter. Print this page. Author Dawry

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he try to run off but his weight and the weight of the purse fell him. Print this page. Author Dawry

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ohh ok know i understand

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i know the boy who snatch the purse wanted some blue-jeaned sitter but what am trying to say is that in the boy house is nobody who can buy him some shoes. Print this page. Author Dawry

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why he doing that Print this page. Author Dawry

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they making fun of starr for working in a store Print this page. Author Dawry

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Starr is mad because they calling her by her nickname and not her real and she said don’t call me by my nickname if you don’t know me. I also hate when people call me by my nickname if they don’t know me. Print this page. Author Dawry

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the kids have their regular teenage fun and hindered by the violence in the community. Print this page. Author Dawry

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well thats not a bad thing to look at but we would not be looking even if it was nice because it is a bargain and then if you fall in love and thats bad because you falling in love with one of the person in the gang. Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr is still trying to protected her brother life Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr is having flashbacks from natasha’s funeral and it making her more sad because she lost khalil. Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr is still uncomfortable with the idea that khalil is dead Print this page. Author Dawry

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i think that shirt can also be used in the church and school to even if the shirt say Rip Khalil says nothing wrong with it that means that she care about Khalil. Print this page. Author Dawry

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uncle carlos is really like her second dad he really care about starr and he also really angry at the officer that pointed the gun at her. Print this page. Author Dawry

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why her uncle is friends with a cop Print this page. Author Dawry

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why she dont want to go to khalil funeral tomorrow Print this page. Author Dawry

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why hailey being racist and rude Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr is so worried about coming out to the street to defend khalil name Print this page. Author Dawry

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why she selling drugs she need the money for something? Print this page. Author Dawry

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know she is scare because she don’t want people to know that she was in the car selling drugs. Print this page. Author Dawry

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they trying to know if that was khalil Print this page. Author Dawry

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hailey snap back and she Remember and now she knows why starr was mad about and starr was mad at her because of the stuff that happen with the police shooting the drug dealer in the neighborhood. Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr is mad at her friend because she said ” you can say something racist and not be a racist/ but my point is if you say something racist is racist no matter what you say. Print this page. Author Dawry

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even if she did not wanted to be racist or not it show racially insensitive she is especially that she would apologize to her. Print this page. Author Dawry

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she was actually being racist she could it believe Print this page. Author Dawry

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the comment that hailey made was very unnecessary but it showed her true color that comment which i consider to be very racist and could make people feel bad about then self. Print this page. Author Dawry

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she get scare and catches her breath when she sees the gun. if i was in that same situation i would be scare for my life too. Print this page. Author Dawry

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they still trying to make khalil look like a criminal Print this page. Author Dawry

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while starr taking to the cops they still trying to find a reason to paint khalil as a criminal. Print this page. Author Dawry

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why he said that he’s ten again while he watching natasha drop Print this page. Author Dawry

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why the cop presen him ??? Print this page. Author Dawry

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he did what the cop ask him to do but khalil scared his hands shaking too much to be still. Print this page. Author Dawry

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the cop pins khalil against the back door of the car Print this page. Author Dawry

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the telling khalil to get out of the car and pull your hands up and dont talk. Print this page. Author Dawry

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this is when situation the being escalate as the officer continues to harass khalil and khalil talks back to the cop about the situation. Print this page. Author Dawry

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i feel like this connects to the things that are happening right now.recently many people across the U.S are protesting due to the police brutality. Print this page. Author Dawry

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they both scared but starr tried to comply completely because of the talk she got from her parents. Print this page. Author Dawry

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Then a police man shot Khalil and I think he killed him and he didn’t have to because he wasn’t doing anything wrong, he always paid attention to the police man. i dont know why the police man shot him he was not doing nothing to nobody. Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr meant to khalil its crazy to think that you okay starr was his last words Print this page. Author Dawry

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here we see a different between starr and khalil even through khalil the right to know why he was getting pulled over. Print this page. Author Dawry

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she wants somebody to have the talk with khalil he is out of control Print this page. Author Dawry

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she is a daddy girl because if her dad says be quiet her and her brothers need to be quiet Print this page. Author Dawry

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all the black parents in america give there children life talk Print this page. Author Dawry

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Starr’s parents, in terms of being protective. Her mom wants to shield her from tough issues, while her dad wants to confront issues head-on. Print this page. Author Dawry

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they need to vote fast because we dont want trump

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trump going to try everything

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trump sometimes act stupid/crazy

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i feel good watching this

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starr is saying that her parents told her 2 things when she turned 12 and the 2 things was that birds and bees talk and then what she should do if a cop stops her. Print this page. Author Dawry

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the character using this word THUGLIFE to say F everybody Print this page. Author Dawry

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the author uses tupac as a example to show the garden heights has affected its youth and depict how khalil feels about society. Print this page. Author Dawry

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what he is trying to say is that he dont care about nobody Print this page. Author Dawry

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khalil say that tupac was the truth and i can relate because tupac was one of my favorite rapper growing up .because tupac music relate too real stuff like for a example this song name dear mama is a story about this mom and him when he was growing up in the hood Print this page. Author Dawry

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she thinks that she control everything she thinks that she was born a queen. Print this page. Author Dawry

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so khalil getting his hairbrush out at the compartment on the door and some of the guys that was in the party came to ask them if they see somebody with a gun at the party because they looking for answers. Print this page. Author Dawry

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she ask the people in the car who you think got shot Print this page. Author Dawry

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in my opinion why they When to the party that got shot up she was smart enough to get out unlike Kenya. Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr is probably thinking that kenya is a little crazy because she trying to fight after gunshots were fired and everybody running and she the only one that trying to fight. Print this page. Author Dawry

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pop wants everybody out at once because the crowd stampedes toward the door Print this page. Author Dawry

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starr is scared because there are gunshots going off Print this page. Author Dawry

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: Now when you go to a party something bad will always happen before you go to the parties and nothing bad happened but now a lot of bad things happen at parties like people getting arrested people get into a fights. Print this page. Author Dawry

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he is trying to buy new jordans so he can look fresh Print this page. Author Dawry

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this means that her friends trying to make fun of drake by trying to sing like drake and making jokes Print this page. Author Dawry

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what they saying is that they did not have nothing and now they making money Print this page. Author Dawry

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what he trying to say is that everybody in the family is going to be good Print this page. Author Dawry

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Khalil tries to keep the mood light when talking about his grandma’s cancer, saying it’s going to be okay, but his weak laugh shows he is very worried about his grandma he dont want his grandma to died./ i feels what he feels because i lost my grandma and it was horrible i did not eat for 3 days i […]

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khalil feels bad for his grandma because his grandma is sick she got something but it probably it something else that is not cancer Print this page. Author Dawry

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I think people warry about khalil grandma’s because when she go outside people be seen thgat she getting better that she don’t look that sick no more but i think khalil is mad at the people the put his grandma to do things like asking for held to his grandma and thats the things he don’t like because she is […]

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why he trying to show off his new jordans and the crisp white tee and the diamonds in his ears. Print this page. Author Dawry

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: She doesn’t respond to her boyfriend but is remembering when she had her first kiss with Khalil when they were in Bible school and she say that she might not be answering chris calls or texts. Print this page. Author Dawry

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she haven seen her friend in a long time and khalil told her dont text nobody were we at.

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I know what she means about that is really hard to be black in this country. I’ve seen police brutality on the news — the George Floyd killing for example. Print this page. Author Dawry

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why she saying is though to work with white kids??

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she feels like she dont wants to be there she wants to be a different person went she at the williamson and when she in garden heights Print this page. Author Dawry

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Starr suddenly realizes that she is still in a place where she doesn’t know anyone. This shows how uncomfortable she feels she wants to go home because she dont know nobody in there. Print this page. Author Dawry

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what she saying is that she got lost and her classmates and teachers think that she is invisible.

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she just want chance to invite next time they do a party and she also say that i can still party with those white kids Print this page. Author Dawry

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she saying she dont want to talk to him

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I think the purpose of including her ignoring chris texts is also about how she has to keep mountainview and garden heights seperate and she not picking up the phone.

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i think she mad at her because denasia allen some serious stank-eye.

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This shows how Starr thinks everyone feels about her. They might not mind that she goes to a school far away because they still know her. But in her mind, they all think she’s the rich girl who thinks she’s better than them.

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i think this is important because it shows how the people in this neighborhood only know starr as mavs daughter and not as who she really is and she just want to live a normal life.

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this means that is a lot of guys with freshest kicks and sagging pants and they grinding so close to the girl they need to use condoms

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what she saying is that he change after he when to that school

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why they drinking they are teenagers

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they was in a party and they was having a lot fun

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this means that she like smelling like weed and she loves music.

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i think she saying she dont belong at this party because she dont know nobody in the party

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what he saying about crash

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what is the difference both of the family are poor so why he is saying that

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tell him to take a shower

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why does scout call her dad by his name atticus instead of calling him dad and why she beging disrespectful to him ??

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Farmer. he was poor and tried his best to get anything he can and bring it to atticus

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i wouldn't remember when i was six how children were like back in the days.

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I wonder the same thing living such a small town even in the 1932.

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he was describing the town

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what is iota

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what is iota

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why he so mad at tigo what he did to make him so mad

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why he so mad at tigo what he did to make him so mad

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why he describes his enemies jacket

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why he describes his enemies jacket

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The outhor lisa damour is tryna tell us that when u feeling down and depressed just try to keep it positive

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The outhor lisa damour is tryna tell us that when u feeling down and depressed just try to keep it positive

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why he was being disrespectful

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why he was being disrespectful

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why did the cop say that

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why did the cop say that

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it was only a cool jacked

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it was only a cool jacked

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so why he was wearing the jacked in the first place

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so why he was wearing the jacked in the first place

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he was a normal guy forget about being a royals or a blood or crip F that just help the guy

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he was a normal guy forget about being a royals or a blood or crip F that just help the guy

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he wanted people to know that he was there that his not gone

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he wanted people to know that he was there that his not gone

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ohh because his a royal they not going to help him thats f**k up

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ohh because his a royal they not going to help him thats f**k up

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why they ran you dont see that andy is dying

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why they ran you dont see that andy is dying

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why she was scared just help the guy

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why she was scared just help the guy

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why he got stabbed what he did

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everybody is the same

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We need justice for him!

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California Flexin.?

Add comments to this video my brother and I made during the lockdown in the Bronx. Print this page. Author Dawry

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i thinks she is try to make a point for her self?

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what they trying to say about this

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why she was not going to church in the first place

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i think she like him but he dont know that she like him

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why they looking in the windows before they go in

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Cool games

Games are cool but some parents think that they are bad because sometimes they can be violent and about shooting and killing like, for example, “Call of Duty and “Fortnite.” These are games about shooting, but there are games that are not violent. All the games are not like that. Another example are games like NBA 2K which is a game about […]

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i agree with you

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ms.moore trying to teach those kids how to be respeful outside the ghetto.

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thats the store that they when to

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why they fighting over the toys

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why they hated ms.moore

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i think joy feels like that because evryday is not a beautiful day

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thats true

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i feel you i dont like fake people

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loyalty always because some people said that they love you but they dont mean it.

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with out money you notting in this life

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i agree with you because if you dont no money die because you not eating and dont a house to live in

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thats fire that he skip college to go to the NBA

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joy feels beautiful insade

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For My People

Many of the policemen don’t think about the African American people. They assume that they are doing something bad and that’s the reason they want to shoot them is not good to treat the African Americans like that because we are all the same.   Photo by DeniseMCal (Pixabay) Print this page. Author Dawry

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hands up don’t shoot

Many of the policeman don’t think about the african american people. They assume that they are doing something bad and that’s the reason they want to shoot them is not good to treat the african americans like that because we are all the same.  Print this page. Author Dawry

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Equality

I looked at a picture that is telling us how women are fighting and protesting to get their freedom and they want women to unite and protest and fight together. And is telling us that women are equal like man.  Marriage Equality by charlesfettinger on 2011-06-05 17:14:24 Print this page. Author Dawry

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Time spend

Video games are a popular thing that people like to play with their friends and families games like Call of Duty and GTA5 and Fortnite are popular games that people like to play. Some people don’t like their children to be playing these games because they said that these games are violent to their children. They said that what they […]

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i agree with cristin because nobody should steal that is bad

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