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Dashiell (Dash) commented on the post, What is American Creed? 2 months ago
Dear Mrs Reed, I found the post a very good read. Your use of jargon was effective because you explained their context and meaning to the reader effectively. I also enjoyed your observation that what it means to be American is an ever changing things and that certain large events alter its definition. This was a great post keep it up!
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Dashiell (Dash) commented on the post, American Creed… Game Seven 2 months ago
Hey Paul, I liked your idea that even though we aren’t different we are still together as American people. This reminds me of how we are so divided as a nation now and we need to understand that it is a team effort and we are all In this together. Very good writing!
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Dashiell (Dash) commented on the post, This I Believe About the American Creed 2 months ago
I liked your use of your personal experience and expertise in order to make a concise and solid point. Good work!
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Dashiell (Dash) wrote a new post, What America Means to Me 2 months ago
I believe that in reality to be “American” is about being someone who upholds the enlightened ideals set forth and a participates in the diversity of great nation, but we must not ignore the horrible things that
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Dashiell (Dash) wrote a new post, Do Violent Video Games Make Kids More Violent 2 months, 4 weeks ago
I have chosen to study how we best inform people about the relationship between violent video games and real life violence. It’s important to me because I feel we need to change how some people view video games.
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Dashiell (Dash) commented on the post, Goal for Stress Management 3 months, 1 week ago
This post may benefit from more academic language.
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Dashiell, this is a beautiful piece of writing. It really spoke to me. I loved every point you made in your post. I loved how you said ““Why America isn’t the greatest country anymore” examines the issues that we have in our nation as well as the great things we have done and the great things that we can continue to do.” because it’s true! I don’t believe that our country has reached its full potential yet. There are great things to come in the future. I’d love to hear more! Fantastic piece of writing.