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Damian commented on the post, White Rhinos
Dear Joseph, I am impressed by your post that rhinos are going extinct. But I think that there are more than 20,000 white rhinos. I find it interesting that rhinos are so hard to transport because of how big they are. I feel like these rhinos are endangered because people hunt them for their exotic meat. I feel like if the rhinos are endangered in…Read More
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I am interested in your post. The topic of bullying in school is interesting to me because many kids in school are getting bullied and no one does anything about it. It’s interesting that you say teachers don’t do their jobs in stopping bullying.
One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “Students do not deserve to be getting bullied every…Read More
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I am interested in your post. The topic of bullying in school is interesting to me because many kids in school are getting bullied and no one does anything about it. It’s interesting that you say teachers don’t do their jobs in stopping bullying.
One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “Students do not deserve to be getting bullied every…Read More
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Dear Damian,
I am super entertained about your post “Minimum Wage?” becaues minimum wage is alway s a problem in the states. All states have controversy about how low or high it is.
One sentence you wrote that stands out fo rme is “But it might also have a negative effect because it might have some negative economic consequences. It is hard to try and support a family only making minimum wage throughout your life.” I like this sentence because you state your opinion and then oppose it. It is quite understanding for both parties.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next becuase you are a very smart writer. All your topics will be fun to read about.
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Raymond
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Dear Damian.
I am Impressed by your writing about “The dangers of California wildlife” by Mcgraw hill.
As you talk about how dangerous wildfires are and how firefighters are risking their lives for us to prevent these fires from getting worse.
One sentence that stood out to me that you’ve said was “fires take lives giving firefighters cancer or asthma as well as severe burns and loss of lives among each other.” this sentence stood out because it is sad how firefighters thousands of firefighters are risking there lives for us and are getting serious burns, asthma, and cancer. this sentence bothers me as lots of them are dying out there to help us while we the community don’t thank them enough for stopping them.
Thanks for writing, I am looking forward to seeing you write more in the future and I hope to see you post more articles soon.