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  • Damian wrote a new post, ISO Giovanni 1 month ago

    when the warm summer air
    turns to crisp fall wind
    the leaves start to descend
    from high upon the trees
    until the they are bare
    the crisp fall wind turns
    to a frigid winter gust
    as snow starts to

    • Cole replied 4 weeks ago

      I love this poem and your choice of adjectives that describe the different elements in a season. My favorite line is “flowers resurrected an animals awaken” it makes me thing of a bear breaking out of its den after a “frigid winter”. Great job!!

    • Wow, the imagery in this piece is fantastic! I could feel the wind and the warmth in real time with you. I think the cycling of your first phrase into a transitional phrase worked really well and provided a nice rhythm. Good job!

    • the repetition in your poem is great. it really emphasizes the cyclical nature of earth’s seasons. great job!

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